Very, very good!!!! I'd give it 20 stars if I could the whole story.
Author's Response:
Awwww thank you so much <3
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 04:34 am
I'm sad to see it end but it was the perfect ending. I loved this story so much. It was definitely one of the best I've read. Great work.
Author's Response:
I'm truly glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 03:40 am
Great story! Loved it! hate to see it end.
Author's Response:
ME too! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 03:30 am
Great story!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 03:30 am
i love it. this was so enjoyable to read cant wait for your next story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 03:24 am
Yea, glad it worked out between Adam and Shuan, I'm a sucker for a happy ending! Thank you so much for this amazing story, truly one of the best I have read on this site. I look forward to your next endeavour!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! Much more to come!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 03:16 am
A Plus!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 02:37 am
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To the best author in the world: I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!
This was such an amazing ending! Such a great story! Seriously beautiful!
I agree with Cherry101: PUBLISH PROFESSIONALLY!!!! WRITE A SCRIPT!!!! YOU WOULD BE AWESOME!!!!!!!!
And I absolutely think a beautiful epilogue and sequel will be amazing. You could even include stories or back stories for all those other cute characters; Celia, Yoshi, Noodle, Jon, his dad Patrick, Janelle, Katie, etc.!!!!!
Thank YOU (!!!) for writing such an uplifting story!
I am BEYOND impressed that you handled the last chapter so beautifully - it's P-E-R-F-E-C-T!!!
And I love that you completed Lila's Thunder as well. That could use an epilogue too! :D
Trois next? Or professional publishing? BTW, when you DO finally publish professionally, please tell your readers so we know to buy your books! :D
~ Nim (your emphatic fan)
Author's Response:
Writing professionally is a big dream of mine so it really makes me kind of emotional when you guys say stuff like this to me! lol I'm so especially glad that you liked the ending Nim Manu because you are a HUGE part of the reason that some chapters of this story even came to fruition. I know I'm not good with responding but please know that your emails and reviews and thoughts on Stereo inspired me more times than I can count so for that I thank you. I finished this story and I really believed in it while I did. Couldn't have done that without you and the other readers so thank you thank you thank you!!!
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 02:06 am
Crying while smiling. It is over but yet it is just the beginning for these two. They have absolutely taken me on an emotional rollercoaster but it was fabulous and would get on it with them again "wink,wink". You have 2 books now completed on here and I have to say I am so appreciative you have shared your talent with us on this site. Can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response:
You're right it is just the beginning for Adam and Shaun. There are soooo many directions they could go together it's crazy. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 02:00 am
As I'm scrolling down reading and it's getting closer and closer to the bottom, I'm barely breathing wondering if Adam is going to get to Shaun and they reunite. And they did!!!
They make me smile with tears in my eyes. Now that it is finished, I'm going to re-read, 'cause it's just that damn good.
Well done, Chica
Author's Response:
I had a few tears writing it so it's all good. Thank you for sticking with Stereo from the very beginning!
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 02:00 am
This was an amazing ride!! You should definitely publish your work,you have a gift. Thank you for sharing your stories.
Reviewer: mya1967 Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 01:41 am
Have you published any books yet? If not you should really look into publishing a novel.Your writing is amazing! I love love love this story, along with Lila's Thunder and Trois .Do you plan on updating Trois?
Author's Response:
You're so sweet. I haven't published yet I just don't feel like I'm ready. Maybe one day!! Thank you so much for the kind words, though, they mean the world to me! Now that Trois is my only incomplete story I can say with absolute certainty that it will be updated. Juggling three stories was too hard and sadly Trois beared the brunt of it but those days are done!
Reviewer: Cherry101 Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 01:23 am
♥♥
Author's Response:
<3<3<3<3!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 12:09 am
OMG!! This was awesome!! Adam laid it down for his woman after he was told the truth by five people. I AM GLAD THAT SHAUN IS LIVING HER DREAM AND WILL HAVE LOVE AS APART OF THAT DREAM!! Voices you are so talented so that thank you for sharing your talent. Shaun your father will see how happy Adam makes you and he will accept him. Her mother is a hot mess!!
Author's Response:
Lol you're absolutely right about Shaun's parents. Thank you as always!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2014 11:06 pm
I'm going to need an epilogue. That was way too good not to know the final outcome. I will not take no for an answer. Well, I will compromise if you agree to write a sequel, featuring the two of them.
Author's Response:
Perhaps an epilogue is in order. I will definitely keep it in mind (as well as a sequel)! I appreciate the review, thank you for reading my story!
Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2014 10:33 pm
I LOVED IT! I LOVED IT SO MUCH!! I had tears inmy eyes man ! im so glad that he forgave her and that they're woking it out!... OMG i cant believe its over! Im so sad but happy at the same time ! cant wait to see what u come up with next!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to hear that! I am also both sad *and* happy that it's over haha! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Redmoon Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 16 2014 10:02 pm
See no she needs to go do her thing over there in New York. She has the opportunity to do what she loves and leave behind that modeling life that she's not about. I get that she's worried about leaving Adam, but at this point it's Adam that has to face his own demons. There's only so much "I'm Sorry" that Shaun can do. If he can't reconcile his issues then nothing she says will work- clearly as we've just witnessed above.
GO TO NEW YORK. Handle your business Shaun and live your life. If and when Adam wants to finally get over his problems and talk to you he will, but don't be sitting there waiting on no one. He left you and if he wants to get back with you then that's on him not you. GO TO NEW YORK woman!
Thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2014 09:13 pm
OMG!! That was so good! Shaun and Adam are just oh...frustrating! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Nice writing Voices!
Reviewer: diggity35 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2014 02:41 am
Celia amuses me. It's cool if it's about her; but it's not cool if it isn't, heh.
Reviewer: smokeymcbandit Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 11:23 pm
Oh my gosh. I'm at work but seriously just want to cry at this turn of events. I should have known it would be too good to be true that it'd all just magically work out after he took her innocence. I do wonder why Adam doesn't believe in forgiveness though. Is it because of his father? Why does he think he will resent her for the rest of his life? At this point, he will resent himself for his actions and Shaun will resent the both of them. I love that he saved her without a second thought but he is such an arrogant confident guy, why is he so insecure about this situation?! God Adam you drive me crazy. I hope we don't have to wait as long this time for the next chapter! LOL because I seriously love this story. I check back once a week. Looking forward to Shaun's move.
I think she should move to New York. She'll get a change of scenery which sounds like exactly what she needs right now. On top of that, she will be doing what she loves instead of being forced into modeling and she gets a breather from the drama LA has been giving her lately. Poor baby. I feel for her and our Rockstar. Serves Adam right; he's going to be heartbroken when he finds out about her move. Anyway. Love it!
Reviewer: kiyosabi Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 08:42 pm
Ha Ha! More to add:
7. Does Adam confide in Katie (his sister) or John (his long time friend)? If so, they may give him the good advice and remind him that he said some pretty crappy (understatement) things about other races and he can see what he is afraid of truly.
7a. Katie his sister must be following some of this. She may have spotted via TV or video the lovey-dovey-ness they exhibited during the fashion show where Adam was performing.... She can shove that fact in Adam's face and make him get real and apologize to Shaun (he is at fault as well).
8. Does Adam realize that he probably failed others (perhaps Veronika) where he allowed them to walk down the path of destruction that happens in that industry? Drinking, drugs, bad crowd, etc.? He can start setting that right?
9.Shaun having some separation IF she takes that job in NYC, can start to realize what she stood for when she first got together with Adam, and realize that her drinking and partying is not her normal and even doing modeling. It may be okay if she has her own self-respect in tact - but not when she is floundering like she is.
10. Once she remembers and gets back to her true self, she can do what she loves in writing. Her parents, Adam and even Celia have tried to remind her of what she had the best of - being herself. As "innocent" or "jaded" that was. It was what was GREAT about her. And Adam said numerous times that she shouldn't change that...
11. Can she write an article about herself (if it is not so incriminating or nor in some way a PR disaster) that has her learning from her experiences, her mistakes and from love and understanding that the best advice is to "be you."
12. Since both Adam and Shaun are being outright IDIOTS I think it is time for some intervention to occur; Katie, John, Noodle, Yoshi, Celia and even the parents....
13. Janelle can whack Adam with the fact that there MUST have been SOME reason he never had Shaun sign anything... I still never understood WHY he was so loose on that point....
14. Last but not least, I am concerned at the lack of protection used.... if that could mean... pregnancy....
14a. If so, she should eventually tell him. Not this horrendous thing of, "Had a baby, looks just like you, never told you because ___ [insert attrociously dumb excuse here], but I love you, so let's make it a family now..." type of ending! While that one could be ARTFULLY done only by the master VOICES.... It would really suck if it just ended like that....
15. VOICES: do what you do best - write it how YOU want it...
Just saying the things I'm thinking about...
~ Nim
PS. Please do an AUTHOR'S NOTE to some one of your reviewers so we have some estimate of when you update next.......... :D :D :D
Reviewer: Nim Manu Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 06:43 pm
Loved loved the update!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 05:19 pm
Just want to say I love this story so much! So happy you added!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 15 2014 05:16 pm
As cruel as he was, Adam wasn't wrong in leaving. Sex doesn't solve anything and if he knows that he's still going to harbor resentment towards Shaun, it's better to break it off now than later. I still think that he's a bit dramatic but that's artists for you lol.
As for Shaun, she apologized multiple times now. There's nothing left to do beside trying to move on. I want her to go to NY. I'm rooting for them as a couple but it'll be good for her and her self-esteem to have a successful career in her dream field.
Amazing updata, I wasn't expecting one so soon :D
Reviewer: paayush Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 04:40 pm
Adam is a jerk! He suddenly has a conscious after deflowering her?! Oh whatever dude.
She should take the job. She should at least try to get a fresh start. Adam is rich; he can afford to fly to NY.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 10:39 am