Title: Baby on Board

I love Mikhail because he's sexy and fine, but he's a criminal.  I think that is just as hot but he's better becasue she can a normal family with him.  She looked at those family pictures with longing and envy you know that you will never have that with Mikhail and be safe.  I'm on team John!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 10:17 pm

Title: Baby on Board

I really like this. At this point I am okay with her ending with either one of them, the one thing i do want is for her or somebody to put the fear of God into to Jackson...so he will keep quite..than again he has no real proof w/o incriminating himself so maybe she should do nothing? that is what I am torn with.

Reviewer: jamminmaraca Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 06:31 pm

Title: Baby on Board

Mikhail alllllll the way!!!!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 15 2012 02:27 am

Title: Baby on Board

It's ok for a girl to have both for a little while. 

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2012 01:19 am

Title: Baby on Board

Yeah I say let her play with both for awhile!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 08:08 pm

Title: Baby on Board

Loved this chapter.  I say let her have both as well until she has to make a decision.  LOL.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 05:46 pm

Title: Baby on Board

I vote Misha!!! She can't leave a happy life with John especially with jackson being shady and the thomas family being in law enforcement. She would have to cut off all tides to her family unless she gets them all busted. But I do like this story though, its awesome. HIGH FIVES KMAJ!!

Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 05:43 pm

Title: Baby on Board

While this chapter (and the kiss) had me warming up more to John, I still want her to end up with Mikhail.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 04:55 pm

Title: Baby on Board

Someone mentioned, why not Jackson. I'd love to read more about Dmitri as well. He seems to be the forgotten one. This is his story too, right? Not as Ana's love interest, but a little bit more about him as well.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 04:12 am

Title: Baby on Board

both? hell why not jackson too and make it the beginnings of a harem? lol i would so love to see that. great job.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 03:42 am

Title: Baby on Board

I want Ana with John becasue he has life that won't get her killed.  But Mikhail is so damn sexy but his life could either kill him or put him in jail.  It's true that John could be killed on duty but his would be an honorable death while Mikhail's would be a death.  I really want her to stop drag racing before she kills herself.  I think that she just realized that she like babies. That kiss was steamy, me likey!!!  More please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 02:24 am

Title: Baby on Board

Nice. John is still my choice. Since she has been intimate with Mikhail already, will we get to see her intimate with John? Why can't John be a bad boy cop?

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2012 10:16 pm

Title: Smoking Engines

Oh lawd she meet his momma!!!  Funny and well written, more please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 08:06 am

Title: Smoking Engines

Love that more than one man is interested in Ana. Ana better look out for Jackson. Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 02:17 am

Title: Smoking Engines

Oh goodness.  

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 02:04 am

Title: Smoking Engines

Holy crap who is Jackson?

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 09:35 pm

Title: Start Your Engines

Mikhail has my vote.  I can't wait for another update.  

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 06:01 pm

Title: Smoking Engines

Out of fairness to John, we have not gotten to see him with her. Right off the bat we get her and Misha because they have a history, but that does not mean that she cannot explore what else is out there besides the family. I'm sure John can be just as bad if need be.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 03:48 pm

Title: Smoking Engines

I see Jackson is going to be trouble. Loving his family. I like them together, of course he is my choice. We'll see who it is in the end.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 03:35 pm

Title: Smoking Engines

Ooooo looks like things are about to get really intereseting now that someone knows who she is at the party. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 03:10 pm

Title: Smoking Engines

Holy shizznits!! you are goooooooooooooooooood!!! lol cant wait

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2012 02:10 pm

Title: Start Your Engines

Misha baby

Reviewer: babygirlsaint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2012 08:27 am

Title: Start Your Engines

Oh && if you couldn't tell who I voted for it's Mikhail all the way...

Reviewer: Sabrina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 01:34 am

Title: Collision Course

How many times can we vote, lol? I don't do cops. && I feel Ana shouldn't either. Ain't no bitch in her blood I'm sure. Plus she should stay loyal to family. I hate when ppl go against the grain.

Reviewer: Sabrina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2012 01:30 am

Title: Collision Course

for me it has been Misha right from the start but to be fair i as a reader haven't gotten to know John just yet so he hasn't been given a fair chance, you know. and another thing - i like the tabu relationship between misha and taty. love isn't a clean cut but messy and loud. and we have seen misha struggle with his feelings for taty so i think that part there can become a source or push when - or if - misha hears about john. i can easily see taty throw that in his face - something like "a little too late to act like a brother, don't you think!?" - if he were to forbid her from seeing john, causing a fraction in the family so your story got a lot going on :)

follow your original thought and feeling. write what feels right for you most of all and know in the end of day you got readers who will read until the end!

and in case my voting got lost in the rambling - i vote FOR MISHA!!! :D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2012 11:24 am



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