I love this story. So cute and realistic! Ups :)
Reviewer: Jess Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 03 2012 10:43 pm
Where is the new chapter?
Author's Response:
It's posted now, I had to take it down because I had skipped over some large errors and it needed to be fixed up a little. Sorry about the confusion.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 02 2012 02:28 am
Liking this story even more. Great update.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 02 2012 02:22 am
It says you updated, was it just an edit on something?
Author's Response:
I did update and it's posted now, I had to take it down because I had skipped over some large errors and it needed to be fixed up a little. Sorry about the confusion.
Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 02 2012 01:57 am
These are the updates i live for. Long and AMAZING! The whole bra situation was great! Now that moms back home i want to see whats going happen. MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: readlover Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2012 11:54 pm
Thanks for a great update. Wow Emery has gone from being a shy girl to shopping for lingerie with Logan. I was surprised that mom was home making Emery feel bad. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2012 01:32 pm
good chapter but I missed Jimmy
Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 02:09 am
I'm a big fan of the story and I don't think you need to change anything. The one thing I questioned was addressed in this last chapter and that was why she just didn't arrange to give the phone back after school one day. I liked the insight into why and I loved this chapter b/c there was so much more interaction with Logan. I think he really likes Em but he's scared of losing his friendship with Darrell b/c he doesn't really have any other stable relationships in his life. I've kind of vacillated back and forth but I really think that Jimmy is Justin and I think there's going to be a point where she has to choose. I'm liking them both and I hope that I'm wrong but the personalities are different.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2012 01:59 am
absolutely brilliant!! And kudos to Logan for having such excellent taste...in video games ! lol! I love Max Payne... and Victoria Secret!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2012 02:19 pm
hahaha! this story keeps me laughing
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2012 05:54 am
I love your story. I like how you put Logan's pov in this chapter. If anything I would say add more Emery and Logan interaction to your story other than that your story is great.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 12 2012 01:27 am
That was too funny, but Emery continues to piss me off. There was no need for you have had an attitude with Logan or for that matter Sarah. I love that Logan agreed to taking Emery shopping she is making progress. I want to know what she wants from Logan, does want a relationship? Is she just seeing if she can catch him and dump Logan? I hope that isn't not the later, I like Logan he's cool people.!! Emery not so cool, it ain't cool playing games with people.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2012 09:24 pm
I really like this story and hope you find more time to update it more. Also, adding a little more smut to the story wouldn't hurt either. I like reading into the mind of Logan, as well :)
Reviewer: Joelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 11 2012 08:23 pm
I like the story. I suggest you move it along so they can get some action going. I like this update but I want more sizzle between Logan and emery! I think you are doing good so far just get them going more or being the person who has phone around to make Logan jealous.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2012 07:50 pm
Don't take that remark to heart. this story is a teenvfic. its something I would consider for my teen dsughter. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 06:51 pm
Nothing about this story is cringe-worthy! It has a good flow and I personally enjoy it!
Reviewer: DecemberUnrest Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2012 06:43 pm
hahah died. Loved it lots, just a little sad jimmy wasnt in it but still awesome. Upload soon. like now. :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 11 2012 05:59 pm