Reviews For Make It Nasty
Title: Chapter 11

She's a horrible mom. I hope she shares with her brother and he cuts his ties with mommie dearest.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 02:50 am

Title: Chapter 11

say whhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttt!! I am drunk and you are brilliantt!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 11

I teared up during this chapter. Why would Logan not kiss her? Even if he didn't want everybody seeing, he could have taken her in the tent. He really confuses me. There are no words for her f#cktard of a mom. I knew that she was shady with that pageant business but to allow a grown man to feel up your child is beyond disgusting. And of course she's not sending Emery away because of her behavior but simply out of guilt. Out of sight, out of mind. I hope that Darrell cuts her from his life. I don't know whats going to happen in the next part but I hope that she and Logan end up together. Please update soon!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 11

yay!! now we can get a jimmy and emery story going!!

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 02:23 am

Title: Prologue

I am almost crying right now. I just wanna take Emery in my arms and hold her. Her mom is a c__t. I hate that word with a passion but bitch is too good for her. Her dad is something his mom should have swallowed. Maybe she will find love with her grandmother. 

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 02:04 am

Title: Chapter 10

I hope Logan and Emery make up soon! Great update!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 10

What the hell is Jimmy's problem?  Logan is acting kind of special as well, so is he still feeling Emery?  Darrell surprised me, I thought that he would trip about Logan and his sister.  I give Darrell two thumbs up!!!  What is going on in Emery's head?  She seems to be confused by her feelings.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 10

I can't wait to read more of this story. My only issue is that I feel llike a pedo, secretly lusting over Logan. HA!

Reviewer: The Gumiho Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 10

Glad your back. Why was Logan being aloof?  Could it be that Jimmy is Logan and he figured out who Alisha is and he was embarrassed?  Or did it have something to do with the promise he made to Darrell.  Curious to find out if Logan is Jimmy and if so how will Emery react. So many questions!  Also looking forward to the party and hopefully a real uninterrupted kiss. Thank you

Reviewer: Cassielovesthisstory Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 26 2012 07:03 pm

Title: Prologue

I LOVE this story. I commend you on makeing a romance between a bunch of high schoolers so hot but still innocent in a way. I hate those stories/shows where the characters are screwing around like 25yr olds when they're only like 16 -__- they are so annoying and unrealistic (in my opinion), but this story is awesomeee.

I LOVE Logan and his sexy coy playboy self. Hes so cute.

The background thing (if im correct, in the beginning of the story Emery says how her phone has a flower background) and Darrell saying Logan broke his phone a month ago, the fact that they have the same numbers in each phone and 'Jimmy' saying they go to the same school, all makes me think 'Jimmy" is Logan. The intereactions between Logan/Emery and Jimmy/Emery are similar as well. My only thing is if it is, how in the world has she not recognized his voice when they talk on the phone lol? 

Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 9

I Love your story. I always get excited when there is an update. Your story is one of the very few I check regularly. thanks!

Reviewer: theErin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 12:11 am

Title: Prologue

Logan is Jimmy. Logan's cousin changes the background on the phone.  Jimmy is always babysitting his cousins. Yes?  Logan is going to teach Emery everything so Jimmy wont need anymore booty calls.   Her parents shouldn't be parents. Phone switch soon and then a summer of hem touring with Darrell. Can't wait

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Ok so I was wrong. The daddy is an a$$hole in his own right. How you choose one child over another, I'll never know. That explains alot about Emery's behavior and I'm glad that she at least has her brother looking out for her. The chemistry between she and Logan is so hot and I can't wait until he can properly kiss her. I picked up that hint when her brother said that Logan had lost his phone about a month ago so now I'm even more convinced that he is "Jimmy". Lucas is nice and all but Logan is where she's supposed to be at.

SN: Everytime I hear that "make it nasty" song by tyga, I think of this story.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2012 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 9

Damn this was great!!!!!!

Logan is stepping it up, but they always get interrupted :(

Reviewer: Lilla Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 03:26 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loved this! The interaction between Logan and Emery in the closest was sooo cute/great! Can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 05:07 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Logan! Logan! Logan! :D

Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 08:17 am

Title: Chapter 9

This is such a cute and light hearted story. I'm loving the highschool romance

Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 07:13 am

Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for updating so quickly. I really thought they were finally going to kiss, Darn It!  Emery and Darrell's parents are awful. Thank God She has Darrell. She wanted Logan and now that she has him she's not sure she wants him anymore because of a guy she only knows by phone and who called her to get the number for a booty call. Get it together girl. Although I do think Logan And Jimmy are one in the same. Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 06:41 am

Title: Chapter 9

I'm really enjoying how you're developing this story!!!  Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next update....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 05:09 am

Title: Chapter 8

I am still trying to figure why she lied to Jimmy and told him that her name was Alicia.  I am liking the parents even less, than I was at the begining of the story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 9

I love this story. Thanks for the update. I hope Logan and Emery get together eventually. I hate the way her parents treat her. Both her parents are crazy. Thank god she has he brother darrell.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 9

I feel l so sorry for Emery she really only has her brother in her corner as neither of their parents care about her.  Her mother Eden only wants a doll that resembles her and father doesn't seem to want her at all.  Lucas is feeling Emery but she is so confused.  Little girl to need to stop playing with people. you are going to get hurt and in the process hurt someone else.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 02:25 am

Title: Chapter 9

I love this story and glad that something happened with Logan. Now I have a feeling Jimmy is Logan! I hope I am right and I hope that they get together and some serious sparks fly! Great update and please update soon!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 12:55 am

Title: Chapter 8

Good job with this story. I love it.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 8

This chapter has me excited and further suspecting that Logan is Jimmy. When reference was made to his parents, he called his father an a**hole and didn't mention anyone again other than his uncle. The pool scene was hot and I was mad at her mom for cockblocking. Who knows how far it would have gone? Also, how does she figure that Emery needs to go to boarding school? I hope that her father puts paid to that real quick. I can't wait for the next chapter with the party. Alot can happen in side closets and back rooms.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 01:36 am



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