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Title: Prologue

I'm excited for the next chapter. I really hope Emery's mom doesn't send her away.

 Reviewer: jmary_84 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 12:23 am
Title: Chapter 8

Love this story. Why does Emery still feel like she needs the book to get Logan.  He has been showing interest beyond best friend's sister. I still think Logan is Jimmy. When he saw her in the bikini he didn't remember it as one he picked out which is why he didn't recognize the picture she sent him. Hopefully?  can't wait for their interaction at the party

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 05:52 pm
Title: Chapter 8

luv this story..... can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:))

 Reviewer: queen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 03:10 am
Title: Chapter 8

I LOVE JIMMY!!!!! TEAM JIMMY!!!!!!

 Reviewer: GUEST Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 02:04 am
Title: Chapter 8

I really hope that Jimmy is Logan because that'd be so perf. I love this story <3

 Reviewer: Thewayiam Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 12:10 am
Title: Chapter 7

Really enjoying this story.  Love the angst.  It's like just kiss her already, would you.

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Date: August 08 2012 07:25 am
Title: Chapter 6

I love this story. So cute and realistic! Ups :)

 Reviewer: Jess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I love this chapter. I love how logan and emery interact with each other. I'm really curious to see what happened while see was in pageants. Great update!!!!

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Date: August 03 2012 06:49 am
Title: Chapter 7

hahaha! I must say this really has my attnetion. I really sort of started to like Jimmy but he seems to be becoming a minor character.....but I still like Logan though

 Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 09:46 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I'm really enjoying your story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: adt2700 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 08:06 pm
Title: Chapter 7

The green-eyed monster bit Logan so he's trying to make his move.

 

 

 Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 07:18 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I love the Logan and Emery time!! Their conversation was soooo cute!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 09:56 am
Title: Chapter 7

I really like where their relationship is going! Thanks for the great update!

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Date: August 02 2012 09:03 am
Title: Chapter 7

Great update! Their relationship is getting better and better and Logan just putting it on smooth on her. I loved her brothers response. Her mother needs to go back where she come from.. she cock blocking to. Loved it. 

MORE PLEASE!

 Reviewer: readlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 07:13 am
Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 05:34 am
Title: Chapter 7

So this Justin character is really creeping me out. He really doesn't understand what it means to back off. Yup, I can't believe that this book is actually helping. lol at her brother's reaction. He knew all this time & doesn't have a problem with it, well, alright. Please update again soon. Definitely love this.


p.s. You know i was thinking about this earlier in the day. I come back a few short hours later and there's a new add. Funny how we think alike. 

 Reviewer: Vava Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 04:36 am
Title: Chapter 7

 Love the long chapter, thanks very much. I'm wondering if she's alluding to the fact that she may have been molested or seen someone molested during the beauty pageant days? That would definitely explain her boyishness and the feelings between her and her mother. I still can't figure out who is "Jimmy" and I'm starting to get antsy. Good luck on finals and update when you can please.

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Date: August 02 2012 03:43 am
Title: Chapter 7

It was a great update. I can't wait to read what happened to Emery. I'm kind of scared...is that crazy? Anyways, Good luck with the move and finals!!

 Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 03:41 am
Title: Chapter 7

I don't have chapter 7, just the option to review

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Date: August 02 2012 03:04 am
Title: Chapter 6

Where is the new chapter?



Author's Response:

It's posted now, I had to take it down because I had skipped over some large errors and it needed to be fixed up a little. Sorry about the confusion.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 02:28 am
Title: Chapter 6

Liking this story even more. Great update.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 02:22 am
Title: Chapter 6

It says you updated, was it just an edit on something?



Author's Response:

I did update and it's posted now, I had to take it down because I had skipped over some large errors and it needed to be fixed up a little. Sorry about the confusion.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 01:57 am
Title: Prologue

Isn't this a chapter we already read?

 Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2012 01:57 am
Title: Chapter 6

These are the updates i live for. Long and AMAZING! The whole bra situation was great! Now that moms back home i want to see whats going happen. MORE PLEASE! 

 Reviewer: readlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for a great update. Wow Emery has gone from being a shy girl to shopping for lingerie with Logan. I was surprised that mom was home making Emery feel bad. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 01:32 pm


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