B!

I prefer A. I don't like that Emery left and it kind of threw me for a loop... Like I'm not quite sure why she left and it's kind of drawn out and not flowing well...

I am going to say option A. Not because I don't want to hear Logan's POV but I think that nothing will get resolved until she comes back. Maybe one chapter from his POV will suffice but you don't need a bunch of them.

I am glad to see you back and I hope that everything is going okay IRL. Wherever you decide to take the story, I will be here to read it so do you. 

-Divine

B.

A

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a

Option A, although it would be great if you could add one more chapter about Logan's perspective. This update was great but not enough was revealed! Can't wait to read more!!

Ummmm wow she should just move in with Logan

I am so disgusted with her mother that I don't even know what to say. And had the nerve to talk about disrespect. Emery should have punched her in the face. I was NOT expecting that. Her mother is worse than I thought and her father is worthless. All Emery has is her brother. Because until Logan gets his shit together and tells her what is going on (and her willing to listen), they might as well just let it go. I have a feeling that Logan is going through something that is just as bad and that saddens me. They both deserve a little peace and a little happiness. I hope that they get it in the next chapter. I hope she goes to England finds herself and comes back FABULOUS! 

I'm starting to think that Emery needs to leave. England might not be so bad. By the time she returns, she'll be an adult. And her time there might give her some confidence and some perspective so she can cut that damn she-devil out of her life. That harpy doesn't DESERVE respect. She pimped out her own daughter, for criminy sake! She should be in jail. What if the coach wanted more than to cope a feel? Would she have prostituted Emery? She didn't care how far it went, he could've easily raped her.  So, no, Emery has so mother.

Damn, if this wasn't a good chapter. It's hard to get a handle on Logan's feelings for Emery. It's clear he has them, but is he having a hard time with them. Wonder what his reaction will be when he finds out that Emery is going away, and not just for the summer. This is about to get really complicated. Post soon, Chica.

What?! Ugh! Nooooooooooo

Seriously though!  So happy to see this updated so quickly then I read it and I had to read it again. So seriously?  What the **** is everyone's problem?  Logan?  Jimmy? The woman who birthed Emery?  That was not what I was expecting. Anxiously awaiting part 2 cuz I just can't.  Good job

Her mother Eden is really an awful parent.  You ignored your children for years and really expect them to be respectful hell they raised themselves.   Eden you just ensured that your relationship with Emery will never be close one.  You send her away now and she will never come back.  I can't say that I blame for blowing up at her mother but her not giving Logan a chance to talk to her that was stupid.

Now bring on part II of Make It Nasty.