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Title: Chapter 1

Gosh that was a turn of events, Alicia that cheeky girl! Great first chapter!!!!!

 Reviewer: LaceTurkeyExpress Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 12:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Really interesting..sounds almost like some freaky human trafficking type shit!! Update pleasee!!!

 Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 10:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Good start to your story.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 06:17 am
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start!! Wonder what's up with Alicia being underhanded with Keyshia? Strippers?

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Date: June 18 2012 05:09 am
Title: Chapter 1

I already know that I'm not gonna like Alicia. Maybe after a few more chapters I could give you more input but nice start.

 Reviewer: ritzbitstrickk Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 05:02 am


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