Title: Chapter 10: Family ties and Jealousy

This is what happens when you BUTT in to people's lives. She pushed him too hard and she ended up saying something she didn't mean, and he is cutting her off. SAD CHAPTER! I really hope he doesn't cut her off.

 

I am glad Chris has other friends.



Author's Response:

Okay. He is socially-awkward but not that much. He has amazing friends who understand him. It seems that Allegra is not one of them at the moment. :D

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 10: Family ties and Jealousy

Chris is not only blind but he's deaf too. Did he not hear what his sister just said? He can be quite self-absorbed at times. The answer is right in front of you but you choose to continue searching needlessly. Allegra needs to act like the grown woman that she is and stop the high school antics. If you like him, he's not a mind reader (not even close obviously lol) so just let him know.



Author's Response:

Yes, Chris is oblivious and clueless to what goes around him but don't blame him for it. He'll never get it. He'll never be able to see things unless Allegra tells him what she feels for him when she'll admit that she has feelings for him. I guess that is because he never really got around having a real self-esteem so he doesn't see things because he oesn't believe in them happening.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 10: Family ties and Jealousy

You are the awesomest, I love this story.  There may be a chance for Allegra to come up in my estimation.



Author's Response:

Really? I'm happy to hear that but I believe that it is short-lived.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 10: Family ties and Jealousy

nice update please update soon, I love these characters



Author's Response:

Did it. :D

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 02:46 pm



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