Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

THAT WAS COLD? Why did she sleep with him.....? was it because someone else showed interest in him? I feel so bad for him. *__*



Author's Response:

She's attracted to him and just wanted to have him at least on a physical level. she's not ready yet to love someone else. But it was cold, as you said. Cold, indeed.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

I was hoping that sex would lead to her leaving her bitch tendencies behind, but I see that I was mistaken.  I was feeling empathy for the lose of her husband due to illness but now I feel nothing but an intense dislike.  Chris I am so proud that you told your sperm donor about himself and that you resigned your job.  That's right Chris do the things and the people (nudge, nudge, wink wink) that make you happy.  Forget about that tramp, but I do hope that apologizes for treating a man that she said was a friend like trash!!!

Don't like Allegra!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your amazing reviews. They cheer me up as usual. Chris is awesome. He finally found the strength to tell the old man that he can go to hell for all he cares. Who knows what will happen next? Maybe Allegra will have a change of heart.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 11:16 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

Poor Chris. I feel bad for advising him to tell Allegra his feelings now. I can't feel sorry or feel any sympathetic feelings for her. She acted jealous and like a b*tch behind Isobel, she pushed until he told her what he wanted and then just abandoned him. I know that this reinforces all the feelings of low self-esteem and self worth that he already has. I wouldn't blame him if he became completely disillusioned behind women. I mean, he told her he loved her to the point of death....I can't get forgive her myself.



Author's Response:

I can feel his pain. I wouldn't wish what he is going through on my worse enemy. And I agree with you. She just contributed to crush further his self-esteem. Will he ever forgive her if she asks him to get together? Who knows.

Thank you for your amazing review.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 10:38 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

Allegra is finally admitting that she has feelings for Chris.  Now will Chris tell her that he is in love with her?  It's about to on like a pot of neck bones!!! So awesome, but I am forever greedy so I must say more please!!!



Author's Response:

Well, I don't really know if she admitted that she has feelings for him. Maybe she just confessed that she wants to have sex with him, you know?

So you can stand Allegra now?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

I feel so bad for Chris. He doesn't deserve this kind of treatment, no one does. She wanted him to be honest with her and now that he did, she just leaves without saying anything? I get that she is confused and still loves her late husband. But she doesn't need to act like such a bitch. So having sex is okay but when emotions are involved its not okay anymore?
Please don't let Chris go running after her and beg for her to take him. I'm sorry but Allegra doesn't deserve it. He needs to leave her alone. Its her lost anyway. And when she comes back, he needs to give er a piece of her own medicine. Let her suffer a little and then after that give her a chance. She needs to learn that she is not the only one who is suffering. I don't like Allegra at the moment.



Author's Response:

Thank God Chris has some dignity. He thinks that she doesn't love him at all so there's no point in her being with him if that would make him unhappy.

The way she treated him is almost inhumane. She didn't even consider him and the fact that she didn't respond seems to suggest that she doesn't really care that much to even say no to him. I agree. He shouldn't give her a chance if she'll ask for it easily. She doesn't really deserve it.

And don't worry. I don't like Allegra either.

Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Ms.stars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 08:50 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

absolutely loved this update. wished Allegra wld give Chris a fair chance, poor bloke wears his heart out but had it stamp on...and yeah, thanks for the Beatles reference :)



Author's Response:

I love the Beatles. Johnny was great. :D

I'm  quite depressed for Chris if I have to tell you the truth. Hopefully everything will be fine.

Reviewer: crimsonred Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

Allegra has me totally confused.



Author's Response:

Me too. Do you hate her now?

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 04:38 pm

Title: Chapter 11: Fucked and Abandoned with a Broken Heart

This chapter just really broke my heart, I feel so bad for Chris. He trying so hard to show Allegra he loves her and she just keeps playing with his emotions. She's so confused and her confusion is just hurting Chris. It must have been so hard for him to finally confess to her and she just walks away. I don't get her, why get jealous over his friendship with another woman if you dont want him?



Author's Response:

Well said. I got really emotional when I finished writing that chapter. I was hurt just as much as Chris. Being treated like he didn't deserve any response even a rejection if that was the case, did dangerous things to his already low self confidence. He didn't want to tell her till the end and still she broke his heart so badly I don't even know if he'll ever recover from this blow. I totally agree with you Allegra's confusion is ruining everything. But I think we should realise that Allegra still doesn't admit having feelings for Chris. She knows that she's attracted to him and she doesn't mind the sex if feelings are not involved, I guess. We'll see how all this mess will go.

Reviewer: E.p Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 03:24 pm



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