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Title: Turning Tables

Yay!!!! especially to Aiden...Thank you for sharing, it was a rollercoaster ride and I love every moment.Happy Holidays!!!!

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2012 01:39 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

I've been reading this story over and over update soon!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 04:57 am

Title: Hometown Glory

Let me just say, this is one of my favorite stories here. Lily and Owen are so funny and adorable. I am enamored my their relationship. I love their closeness and their strong backstory. 

Aiden.. bugs me...in a good way. I have my issues with him. He's hard and ruthless and cunning but he's falling for our girl LILY. I wish he'd just face fact already.

AleX better know as Voldemort in the office is just plain sick in the head. He wants to use LILy to fufil some revenge plot he has against Aiden. I'm going to need him to grow the hell up. like Yesterday.

As for the end of Cold Shoulder.. Whew. Hunty-boo, Lily is about to be in a world of trouble.. Not answering the phone.

Update soon

Reviewer: CestianiDauphin1 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2012 11:26 pm

Title: Hometown Glory

Please don't be one of these chicks that writes a burning story, gets us all hooked and then disappears. That was freakin AWESOME!

I'm over here with baited breath waiting for the next update!

Thanks for sharing your talent with us! 

BTW...that first love scene was haute, hot, caliente, scorching, searing, too hot to handle and on and on...

Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 07:46 pm

Title: Hometown Glory

very interesting 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 15 2012 02:44 am

Title: Hometown Glory

This is scary lolz

Reviewer: The nihilst chick Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 07:14 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Ha! So good. I'm leary about the pill, but Aidan just screwed a dirty skank so Lily gets a chance to enjoy herself too. 

Reviewer: Vi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2012 02:05 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

What an amazing story! I read it all in one sitting. I hope Aiden gets to Lily in time. Whether he does or not, I have a feeling Aiden is going to punish Lily (and Nate) something FIERCE! Please don't make us wait too long for an update.

Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 11:18 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

I just read the entire story and I cannot wait until the next update! I don't have an account set up for this site but I'm going to make one so I can keep up with this story. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 03:54 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

I just read the entire story and I cannot wait until the next update! I don't have an account set up for this site but I'm going to make one so I can keep up with this story. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 03:53 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Damn.

Reviewer: Nervous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 09:54 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

SHIT! NO! why she take the pill i thought she had better ressitance than that. NATE IS A DOUBLE NO NO! BLAIR NEEDS TO GET TO STEPPING AND SHE IGNORED BOSSMAN!!! THANKS FOR THE LONG CHAPTER! 

HAPPY WRITING! 

Reviewer: readlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2012 04:39 am

Title: Hometown Glory

I forgot this part. Aiden should have warned Blair to stay away from Lily.. Just to say she is not her concern is not enough. Once Lily told him she ran into Blair and she was questioning her he should have known what was going to go down from their.. Aiden's head is definitely not in the game.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2012 05:15 pm

Title: Hometown Glory

Hopefully, Lily gets home safe and sound with her virture in tack and Aiden no the wise that she was at a rave swapping spit with Nate until the his partners granddaughter decisions to drop in and visit and just puts all of her business out on front street.. Oh that would be good..  Heheee..  Hopefully, Aiden wouldn't punish her to badly..

Can't wait to see how this plays out.. Lily has just bought herself a good old fashion spanking..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2012 05:13 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

*Takes out a switch and stripes Lily's ass for her idiocy!*  LOLOLOL!

All right when the chapter first started all I could think was "Please don't let Alex see Blair in Aiden's office..."  But of course I knew that wish was in vain.  *sniffs dramatically*

Great chapter.  Loved how this is set up to explode.  I sense a subsequent punishment occurring.  Nearly quivering in anticipation now!

I thought keeping the punishment fairly light this time was a good move.  A submissive shouldn't be frightened by her dominant.  Usually it is a poor dominant that is unable to gauge what is appropriate.  Excellent job!

Thank you for a great chapter!! 

Reviewer: Miki Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2012 04:34 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

dun dun dunn...! talk about cliffhanger...! lord the next update is going to be something else - hahaha Aiden is going to looooose it, especailly now that his feelings are all over the place.

i'm glad that Lily let her hair down and did something for herself for once plus i'm glad to see her new gained confidende but damn, i do hope Nate doens't take advantage of her. he seemed like a really cool guy and damn...no. i hope it stops before going to far. Lily would never forgive herself.

but i have to say i LOVE GRANT!! HAHAHA that guy cracks me up with his thoughs and comments - he's a great character!

looving this story!! thank you so much for the update!! brillant like always!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2012 11:07 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Why did she?? Ugh!!! He's gonna be so pissed. 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2012 04:51 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

when it rains it pours lol, Lily wanted to let loose and taking E will do that for you, good for her

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 09:21 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Ooo, Aiden is going to be pissed! Punishment is definately in the future for Lily! Too bad he didn't kiss her,he would be made and she wouldn't be with Nate! That's the way love goes!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 11:07 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

So Blair and Alex are perfect for each other...should have guessed. Aiden has so much to come to terms with but for someone who has been in control for so long, it is going to difficult to let go of this control to gain control in another sense. It is also going to be difficult for him to realize that he is also being controlled by the one thing he wants full control over more than anything else....his emotions. He caved when he called her. He's slipping.

I knew he never kissed Blair which was why he could say what he said to her so easily. She is so silly not to realize that a man who doesn't kiss you will have nothing to do with you unless it is a mindless physcial act that he can walk away from very easily.

I am happy she is having that experience with Nate. She has to learn to draw her lines and boundaries and stick to them. This will be a good learning experience for her.

Looking forward to reading more. Thanks for a wonderful update. It was worth the wait.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 07:44 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Not good at all for either of them. I hope she does not lose her virginity to him. Hoping someone comes to her rescue, maybe Owen. It's defitinetly more than just a sub/dom relationship they have going on.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 07:39 am

Title: Rolling In The Deep

Aiden, didn't know she was with Alex. Alex needs to let this go!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 07:25 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Uh-Oh Indeed!! lol!

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 05:42 am

Title: Rumor Has It

thumbs up on sexaul encounter. I do not like Alex, why must people use others in their plans to screw over someone else. He hates Aiden, then pay him back but not at Lily's expense.



Author's Response:

usually people who do that are miserable, which is exactly what alex is. everything will come into the light and it will be so fun to write, thanks for reading :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 04:46 am

Title: Crazy For You

She has two guys to work for now, Is the other oone a Dom too? I'm guessing yes! She will not be laughing once she becomes Aiden's sub!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 01:55 am



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