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Title: Chasing Pavements

I'm enjoying this story. I was shocked she said yes so quick. I can't wait to see how this works out! Love the relationship with her brother.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 01:43 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Wow! These people!

 Alex: See, people like him can get you killed. He's a pathetic, weak coward. he doesn't have the guts to confront, not just Alex, but that crazy ass Blair, onwhatever he's still chewing on concerning her. Because it can't be based on how she acted in Aiden's office that he ever thought this woman gave a rat's ass about him. It really says more about him, than her; however, I now clearly see that they deserve each other, because he's just as crazy as she is. And somehow, in some insane twist of fate, their common denominator is Lily. In both their quests, she is, or, will be, their path to Aiden.

Lily: I understand her knee-jerk reaction with Nate, but that's dangerous. I think she needs to square with herself this sub thing; and maybe, have a real, in depth, conversation with Aiden about it. Clearly define the lines of the agreement, the reality of it, because she's reacting to other women in a way in which she's putting herself in danger. Does she owe Aiden a damn thing? No. But she's reacting emotionally like she does.

BTW, lets hope she doesn't get date/ganged-raped because she drugged out on stuff she shouldn't have taken. She is SO set up for that right now!

Aiden: Just because he says its done, doesn't mean that's so concerning Blair. He needs to take things more seriously in regards to her. It's amazing that he doesn't see how unstable Blair is. He's a lawyer; a large part of his job is to know how to read people. READ BLAIR!! She's crazy, dude. Also, the same goes for Aiden about the clear lines of this "agreement." Technically speaking, if someone is interested in Lily, its none of his business. He cant have it both ways; react  because Lily attracts attention and tell Lily Blair is not her concern. Sex is what he propositioned her with, and sex is what he gets. NO kissing subs, remember? 

Oy Vey!!

Crazy good stuff!


 

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 01:30 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

I know this is selfish to say but I need an update ASAP!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 09 2012 01:01 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Uhoooooh,I can't wait for your next update!!!! Aidan was so wrong in the way he has treated Lily and has the nerve to call out her name while f@$%^& some skank,ugh. Now Lily,you know your're wrong for taking that pill at a RAVE and rubbing bodies with Nate and ignoring Aidens' call....OoWee,the girl is so done when Aiden gets a hold of her,lol Hurry back PIW!!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 09:21 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Brilliant, Brilliant, Brilliant

 

This story is AWESOME.

 

Please, please, please update ASAP

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 08:28 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

I'm so conflicted, I want Lily to start living life for herself and be "free" but I think she's going about it the wrong way. I feel bad that she's hurting over her relationship with Aiden and got invested, but it isn't exactly like Aiden wasn't contributing to her investment. I can't wait until the next chapter! 

Reviewer: Mel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 08:11 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 07:18 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Oh my.....

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 05:24 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Oh Lily shame on u baby Gurkha. I know u wanted to have fun and relax your mind but Nate and drugs were not the way not the way at all. I hope she doesn't do something she will definitely regret later and BossMan is not going to be very happy when he find out. I was laughing my behind of thinking okay she did not answerher phone what if Widen has a tracker on her phone and went and got her.

Great update. Thank you so much. Hope to see another update soon.

Happy writing!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 02:02 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

Well damn.  So you're just gonna leave us hanfing there hunh?? So not right  But I will say that this cjapter is excellent  I felt bad for Alex last chapter but now his true extra-doucheyness has come out and if Lily gets hurt behind Blair then all hell will break loose. Yes Blair is a nut and subject to do most anything in her delusions of her and Aiden being together.

I can't be angry with Lily.  She'sa young lady, naive and definitely not familiar with the D/s lifestyle. She's caught feelings and doesn't know how to handle them.Blair intimidates her to an extentand Aiden is too busy fighting his true feelings.At first I was angry with the him and his quick-fuck but that's who he is, or used to be. Although I know he will be, he can't be too pissed with Lily. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 01:47 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

GOT DAMN THIS STORY IS AMAZING. SERIOUSLY, MY FAVORITE STORY ON PLANET EARTH. I WILL RE-READ UNTIL YOU UPDATE... PLEASE DON'T BE LONG. OH MY WORD. OH MY WORD. 

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 01:36 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder


Damn Lily!  Damn Aiden!  What's wrong with you two?  I'm really pissed at Aiden's casual fuck.  I hope Lily doesn't do the same thing.  Aiden was so wrong for that and Lily is just hurt by his casual attitude towards her.

I hope that Nate backs off and Lily goes home and sleeps it off. I'm sure that Aiden will find out that she was with Nate, but after the way he acted, he has no right to be jealous! (Although I know he will be). 

When he said that he didn't kiss sub's, I was pissed!  She was ready to give that fool her virginity.  Maybe if Aiden saw her kissing Nate, he'll realize that she's more to him than just a sub. 

Loved the update!

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 12:07 pm

Title: Cold Shoulder

You bad bad woman! The cliff hanger at that part sucked. lol  Seriously though, this story is so good.  I'm glad Lily isn't moping over Aiden and is living her life, but I can't wait to read Aiden's reaction to Lily not answering his call.

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 08:48 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

this is the worst/best place to leave off! ugh! update soon PLEASE

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 08:05 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

 

Reviewer: mjfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 07:19 am

Title: Rolling In The Deep

it's cool how your chapters are named after adele songs

Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 06:39 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

i hope that nate doesnt get the chance to take advantage of lily while shes in that type of condition, cant wait to read more 

Reviewer: sandycheecks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 06:37 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

OH SHIT!!! Aidens gonna freaking flip! I hope lilys not too messed up to get the paperwork done properly either. But you know what aiden slept with someone else so i cant hate on Lily

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 06:19 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Honestly I'm not liking Lily at the moment. She is acting like a stupid naive girl. Even if Aiden was her boyfriend. Why is she bothering about a stupid ex girlfriend. What had happened in Aiden's past with girls is not her problem. Plus she and Aiden had an understanding. She is to be his sub and that is that.  If she can't handle it then she needs to be straight with him and tell him that she don't want to be his sub anymore. Instead of acting like a stupid teenage girl!!!!! Grant had told her how Aiden wants nothing to do with Blair, how she is a stalker and what not and yet Lily is acting like a possessive girlfriend and its kind of annoying. She is acting as if Aiden had done her wrong or something. Plus she shouldn't have took his phone let alone read his text. It seriously pissed me off when she did that. It wasn't any of her business. That was personal. I'm sure she wouldn't have liked it if Aiden went through her phone without her consent. Sorry if it seems that I'm whining. But Lily had really worked on my nerves in this chapter. I get that she may be a little hurt, but jumping to conclusions like this is not the way to go. I would understand her behavior if she was his girlfriend, but she is not. If she is already acting like this without even being Aiden's girlfriend, then I don't want to know how she would be when she is officially his girl.

Reviewer: Anony Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 06:07 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Aww man, Lily shouldn't have taken that pill. I hope she doesn't end up doing something she will regret when she comes down from her high.

Aiden not acknowledging his feelings for Lily is not helping anyone. He better not be mad at Lily for going out when he went out and screwed somebody else.

Thanks for the update!

 

Reviewer: juleah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 06:01 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

I hate that Lily jumped to conclusions but Aiden not telling her the full story didn't help either. Great update! I can't wait to see how Aiden takes this!

Reviewer: Very impatient Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 05:39 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

shit!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 05:27 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Oh Damn ! That was an awesome update . Can't wait to see what Aiden has to say when he speaks to Lily . Can't wait for the next update .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 05:23 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Lily is about to make a  big mistake, but really Lily you are the sub to Aiden dominant so really there is no love involve.  At least Aiden is not ready to admit that he has feelings for you yet.  Grant told you dumb ass that Blair is a stalker, so why are you jumping to conclusions?  Where is her spidey sense?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 05:09 am

Title: Cold Shoulder

Oh my gosh! Great chapter! Can't wait to see how Aiden is going to react to Lily ignoring him for once. He's treating her so unfairly, so it's good to see her rebel against him (in a sense). This story is lovely, I'm always looking forward to the next update :) Oh and Nate is totally hot too...all the guys in this story are hot. 

Reviewer: gentlehaikus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2012 05:01 am



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