I find it really interesting how Aiden didn't show the same curtious gestures to Blair in the flashbacks as he does do with Lily in the present. I think this goes to show how much respect Aiden has for Lily and how much less he has for Blair. And the no subs in the bedroom rule definetely shows how hard he is falling for Lily. Great update!
Author's Response:
Good point! I think we can all agree with who Aiden's wife would be if it was between Blair and Lily!
Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 28 2012 09:10 am
You've done it again! The way you tell this story is so persuasive. I feel like I'm watching it in my mind, I'll be waiting impatiently for the update!
Author's Response:
:D thanks! I appreciate that a lot!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 04:09 am
And the slut Blair has resurfaced...this is not a good thing especially for Lily and that means we are about to see the really nasty side of Aiden. She's going to try and mess with Lily because she wants Aiden; Alex is going to extact revenge against Aiden by using Lily and Owen is going to be pissed that his sister is in danger. No this is not going to be good for ANYONE of them because Aiden is going to be a really nasty a**hole in this mess of a situation. The next chapter is going to be something. By the way, a sub is in his bedroom...she's the one.
Author's Response:
haha she isn't leavin anytime soon, the rivarly bewteen Alex and Aiden will blow up 10 times worse with her around. Owen is already weary of Aiden and I dont think that will ever go away. I don't think Aiden will ever follow his rules with Lily around. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:50 am
Hot! Very nice. Now that is an introduction. At least he fed her properly first...LOL!! I like how he made her feel good and welcome in his home and for someone like him, one can tell Aiden is not someone who allows any and anyone to come to his home much more to his bedroom. He is very private person who has kept himself separated personally and professional.
Alex...happy to see that Lily knows he's Voltemort but its for her to trust what she is feeling. Instinct has told her that there is something not right with him but evil can disguise itself very nicely.She needs to be careful all the time.
Author's Response:
lol every girl could use a fine steak before being eaten out, yeah Aiden is very private but maybe that will change....
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:18 am
So either Alex likes her also or he's doing anything he can to royally piss Aiden off, and it seems to be working. I like that about him.
Lily is intrigued by the world she has just allowed money to push her into. Her experiences are going to be something to read about. Aiden and how he's going to bring about her confidence while controling her is going to be something of an interesting task. Can't wait to read how he goes about it,
Author's Response:
There will be a constant push and pull with those 2, and one of them may push too hard..
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 12:00 am
Aiden...Aiden...Aiden. What a proposal. Lily, you have that man tied...now who is really the dom and who is really the sub? She is going to change his views and he is not going to be able to keep his hands off her. He is trying to keep it business and his emotions from getting involved by paying her but that is not going to work. The first week he coudn't stop thinking about her and all the other subs were unable to satisify him and bring him release...that was before this deal. He will cross the line with her sexually and that may just break the bond that will develop between the both of them.
Author's Response:
Aiden has no idea what he just did lol
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 11:37 pm
Pictures:Love the people you chose to represent your characters. They look well together and they match the characters you have described so
Lily and Owen have a very caring relationship but Aiden...he is going to be something interesting to see how she works out with him. Hired at the local store? I like it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, it was between Kat Graham and Jordan for Lily but I think Jordan fits more. lol I wish I was offered great jobs at the local liquior store!
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 27 2012 10:59 pm
I love this story! And Blair needs to go sit down somewhere.
Author's Response:
thanks! Blair needs to pick a seat in the Staples stadium lol
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 10:24 pm
Looooved this update!!! I'm hipnotized with Aaaaiden,oohlala, can't wait for him and Lily to really get it on and place sleazeball Alex back in his lowlife place where he belongs,bwahahaha! Deuces...
Author's Response:
:D thanks! it will be epic!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 09:54 pm
Some how, having a Blair in the picture for Aiden, doesn't surprise me. I knew Aiden didn't know she was with another man. He's a lot of things, but a homewrecker isn't one of them. He wouldn't intentionally break up a relationship just for some coochie like that. Even he has a line not to be crossed. However, it kinda serves him right for just randomly doing some strange chick he met at a party just because he lacked self-control and she stroked his ego. Now, he cant get rid of her.
And really, this "sir"business is a might much for me. It may be part of the lifestyle, but, once he put his penis in her mouth, that was out thr window.
Glad Owen is ok.
Nice!!
Author's Response:
lol he got the one what won't go away, its interesting that you say that; lily giving him oral sex may have changed things up a bit...
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 09:37 pm
Great update.....
Author's Response:
thanks :D
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 08:28 pm
Great story can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks :D, I'm working on it tonight!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 07:09 pm
love love this story.
Author's Response:
thanks :D (so happy!!!)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 06:19 pm
loving this story!
Author's Response:
thanks :D
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 05:59 pm
Akex is tripping Blair was not interrsted in being your wife. Her crazy wanted to get her claws into Aiden and is still trying. Aiden needs to geto press charges. I can see her attempting to hurt Lily. I am so glad that she didn't answer the phone when Alex called. Blair is coocoo gor Coco Puffs! Have her kill herself, no one would miss her. I know I'm horrible aren't i? Loving this stiry and these characters although and Blair make my teeth itch!
Author's Response:
your reviews give me life! Alex and Blair are one in the same, (teeth itch-dead!)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 05:56 pm
Oh dear that Blair seems like she 's gonna be a hand full. Love this story . Can't wait for more .
Author's Response:
yes she is lol, thanks :D
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 04:27 pm
Blair and Alex are going to join forces to try and ruin things for Lily and Aiden aren't they?.....Sucks fo them that they won't succeed. I don't think Aiden would let anything or anyone take Lily away from him, including Lily LoL. And I highly doubt Lily would do anything to betray Aiden like mess around with Alex.
Love this story. More soon please!
Author's Response:
......maybe..you'll have to read and see ;)
Reviewer: Nicci Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 03:47 pm
WONDERFUL chapter! Aiden and Lily relationship is fantastic to read about, I love hoe it is progressing so far! Please update soon your writing is GREAT!
Author's Response:
thanks! I love writing them, its so fun! :D
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 10:53 am
love the update
Author's Response:
thanks :D
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2012 10:28 am
I was laughing when Owen and Lily were looking up bdsm and when Lily covered her boobs!
Author's Response:
lol!
Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 25 2012 06:41 pm
Lily reminds me of myself, very low confidence. It's only the first chapter and I'm hooked!
Author's Response:
Same, I modeled her after my personal traits. Thank you!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 25 2012 04:22 am
typos? what typos? how do you expect me to look for typos when you make the story so gush-durned hot?
First encounter: wow! ba-da-boom!
Lily is soooo sweet and good, that I would hate for her to get mixed up in the Alex-Aiden drama. She's going to get hurt, when she realizes Alex was just(?) using her to get his revenge. That sux.
Author's Response:
haha thanks! I will admit to doing 'reasearch' while I write love scenes. Alex needs to sort out his priorities!
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 24 2012 02:23 pm
Thumbs up,but I was alarmed and hot at the same time with Aidens' and Lily first sexual experience...Girl what have you got yourself into,lol This story is becoming very interesting and I can't wait for the other woman to make an appearace...Juicy!!!
Author's Response:
:D, she will make a huge appearence....
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: October 24 2012 08:45 am
Im so envious of Lily right now..
Author's Response:
as am i!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 23 2012 08:19 am
Mr. Morgan is unf! Your cast is perfect!
Author's Response:
Yes. Yes he is. *tugs collar*
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 23 2012 02:04 am