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Title: Hometown Glory

ooohhh...somebody's in trouble!  Aiden basically cheated on her, in her opinion, although he was just being trifling.  A. will need to come clean with Lily about his feeling in order to get one foot out the doghouse andno he doesn't need to get her a dog.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 07:08 pm
Title: Right As Rain

Aiden, Aiden....*SMH*

 

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Date: June 27 2013 06:29 pm
Title: Right As Rain

Aww, Apple is too cute.  I couldn't do S&M because that punishment would have me running out the door lol, but I love this story. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 03:22 pm
Title: Right As Rain

"For your explanation to my ass."

Love that line! I'mma save that one for a special occasion. ;)

 Reviewer: KiwiBabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 01:47 pm
Title: Right As Rain

“Forward your explanation to my ass”

 

Love that response.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 11:04 am
Title: Right As Rain

Yay! You're back. We missed you. Great welcome back chapter.

 Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 09:59 am
Title: Right As Rain

That is the cutest little kitten ever 

 

Also great update! The paddling was intense for me and so was the near choking exprience, but I'm in for the ride. I want to see what next he does, well that is after he's gotten Lily to forgive him 

 Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 05:29 am
Title: Right As Rain

That kitten is so cute!!  Leslie was a little confused, see she thought that the hit and run sex with Taylor was special. She obviously didn't get the memo about bbeing his stress releiver that poor delusional thing!  Lily you're still stupid but I am liking the deisplay of backbone.  More Please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 05:00 am
Title: Right As Rain

Well, it was good until Cruz came along! Forward your explanations to my ass?!! LOLOL!!! Love that line!

I like the way Aiden is with Lily. Its a nice change. And meeting his mother is a big deal, so Lily should take that into consideration.

Nice!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 04:48 am
Title: Right As Rain

Excellent update!!!!! Totally loved it. Can't wait to see how Aiden gets out of this one. Your..." forward your explanation to my ass " line literally had me in stitches. I gotta use that line on somebody lol !!!!! Looking forward to more xoxoxo :)

 Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 04:37 am
Title: Right As Rain

lol "You should get her a puppy, that might help." DEAD

 Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 04:31 am
Title: Right As Rain

Ouch. 

Aiden is so trifling.

 Reviewer: Soledad Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2013 04:28 am
Title: Hometown Glory

Wow the face claim for Aiden is hawt!!

 Reviewer: 10 Stars Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 12:24 am
Title: Hometown Glory

I like!

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Date: June 16 2013 08:25 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

I've been wanting to read this and I was finally able to sit down and readl through it all, and this is definitely one of my favorites on her now. It's simple enough to understand and keep up and the little details you add in fit so well. I wasn't into 50 shades and bdsm all that much but now I'm curious..

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Date: June 15 2013 05:49 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

i love the game of thrones! this was a good update 

 Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 06:06 am
Title: Crazy For You

I remember Noah's Orders it was never finishted it reminded me of the secetary movie.  I know this story reminded me of fifty lol and  the secretary. Any inspired works of these books or movies are fine with me!! Keep up the good lit!

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2013 09:04 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

LOL!! It's good to have you back, I love the update. I hope everything is working out good for you today. And it's great to lnow you watch Games of Thrones, the Red Wedding was TERRIBLE! Me and my mother were in tears about the cruelity of that episode. My dad reads the books so he laughed at our reaction. LOL!!

 

Anyways love the story and I can't wait for more :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you it's good to be back! I think things are finally settling down but knock on wood lol. Ugh the RW had me in tears and i knew it was going to happen but still, this show is toxic lol

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 04:29 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

Love this story can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks :D

 Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 02:42 pm
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

Did you watch that season finale dude? I'm heated at the ending. Great chapter. The middle portion was repetitive but i'm guessing you were trying to get us back into the swing of things. 



Author's Response:

Yes imo, the RW should have been the finale, the actual finale was so dull and the last Khalessi scene had me cringing. Yes I think that was one of my biggest problems, there wasn't a lot of structure and I usually make outlines for the chapters and this time I didn't so I learned my lesson lol

 Reviewer: Ashash Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 09:43 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

I'm glad you updated!! and If it means anything I was still entertained



Author's Response:

Thanks! That makes me so happy :D

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 07:32 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

WOW, This was one sexy ass chapter. Poppy I can't wait to read more about BDSM!



Author's Response:

:D for the next chapters i'll need to do 'research' so that should be fun lol, thanks for reading! 

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 07:04 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

Oh boy! It's about to be on! Lily, gurl, I don't know if you're ready for Aiden.



Author's Response:

you know those people who never drink before their 21st then on the day they decide to try it all because they think they can handle it? that's lily ;)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 06:33 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

im always glad to see an update of this story! thanks for the great chapter!! more please.............



Author's Response:

thank you I REALLY appreaciate that, i'm already writing the next chapters so more is coming up :D

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 05:27 am
Title: He Won't Go-Part 2

Aiden and Alex made peace with each other and they both agree that Blair is cray cray!! Lily you can"t get upset when Owen spits the at you, you are fucking your boss and it does net some benefits.



Author's Response:

lol that is the most peaceful they will ever get with each other. and you ain't lyin, the truth hurts

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2013 03:58 am


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