then hell yaaay - bring it! :D i'm curious as hell to see how George takes the news but also how life changes for Tyler and Emma - thank you, AM! i'll be looking forward to the post ;)
Author's Response:
I'll post it as soon as I finish writing it. Yay!
Thank you for pushing me.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2012 01:10 pm
Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint you like that. Would you like to read an alternative ending?
aah, you're too kind! :D personally i wouldn't mind more Tyler, lol, but it's your story and in the end your gut-feeling reunited George and Emma so there's no need for an alternative ending especially since it wasn't something you envisioned in the first place, you know - lord, i hope i make sense, lool! - but thank you for considering it!! :D
Author's Response:
Actually I did envision an alternative ending before end and I wanted to write it and post it.
The only thing that I need is someone to push me to write it down! So, my offer is still valid.
I made them reunite because I felt that it was probably the easier thing to do, and because I wanted the all to be happy. :D
Date: December 28 2012 03:25 pm
i like this story A LOT because it's REAL. it involves the many complicated emotions couples go through during a divorce then later try to find a common ground - now i like taylor. handsdown. i have seen you introduced him, lol!! but since George & Emma have history and lots of emotions, i haven't dared to hope sooo THANK YOU for this update - reading about Emma having steamy dreams about Taylor made my day, lool!! =)
Author's Response:
I dare say that you like Taylor, then? I like him too. He is really lovely. I thought about writing as him as well and then I thought I didn't need to feel the feelings of a third person. Led me to bad thoughts about one of the main character ages ago when I was writing another story. Let's just say I couldn't write it anymore because I hated the she in the question with a passion.
I'm happy that I achieved my dream. Never been divorced, nor married (too young for that shit, I'm just 19), but I'm glad I can relate to my characters. That's the reason why I write! Because I want it to be real.
Anyway this is going to be a happy ending however it finishes. Emma learnt something and she will be stronger, which is all that matters. And the same goes for George. He will become a better person. And Taylor...he will be happy, with or without Emma.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2012 07:26 pm
At first I really liked this story but first you make her lose the baby then you'll most likely end up with her having sex with that taylor guy...sorry but this isn't doing it for me any longer...
Author's Response:
It wasn't in my mind to even make Emma have sex with Taylor. It would only complicate things if they have random sex. I can assure you that if they are not a couple, it won't happen.
I'm sorry that you feel that way, but I appreciate your opinion.
I made her lose the baby because Emma was in no condition to have another child. She was mentally and phyisically fragile, and although she loved the baby it would have been so complicated for George and Emma and maybe they would have gotten back together, but the problems would have still been there, unsolved, leading them to a fake recounciliation.
Date: December 10 2012 07:18 pm
Short update but good start. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks to you!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 12:38 pm
I'm one to talk I meant The Beginning. Sorry
Author's Response:
Thank you Water Anonymous. :D
Reviewer: Water Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 14 2012 07:24 pm
This story is the sequel of Illusions: The End.
Emma is on the brink of depression and she has lost herself. George finds it incredibly guilty to cope with the guilt he feels for causing her to lose her psychological equilibrium. Will they be able to get back together, or will Tyler be the best person to pick Emma up and make her feel herself again?
Interesting start to the sequel. Depression is a illness that is truly hard to over come no. But I am wondering if Emma's depression really has anything to do with her relationship to George or if there is something more to it.
I thought they guy Emma was seeing was named Taylor, unless Tyler is someone new.
Author's Response:
I meant Taylor. Sorry, I was thinking about another story I was writing.
I'm not a hundred percent certain about the cause of Emma spiralling into depression. Surely her relationship with George played a part. She started thinking irrationally and having negative thoughts. She still keeps up the front, but she's not well. She's changed. She has no self-esteem.
Thank you for reviewing. :D
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2012 02:21 am
Damn, Emma isn't so forgiving George. You only have yourself to blame. More please.
Author's Response:
George= massive loser. You go and break Emma's heart by treating her badly and at the same time act like a jealous cavement, and then you want her back. Wake up. It's not going to happen quickly, and I don't even know if it'll happen.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2012 02:06 am
great beginning...more please
Author's Response:
No worries. I hope I can post the next chapter tomorrow.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2012 01:50 am