Thanks for a good update. This heart wrenching to see Emma has list her way because of George. Hopefully with therapy she will get stronger to dump that loser. I like Taylor he is very patient with Emma.
Author's Response:
Aww, I like Taylor too. However, I don't know if there is a future between him and Emma.
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[Report This]Date: October 16 2012 12:47 pm
I really like this but the chapters are way too short. The title of your story has a spelling error. Is it The Begining or The Begging
Author's Response:
Thank you for noticing. I thought there was something odd with the title but I couldn't figure it out.
I know, the chapters are short. I'll try to make longer ones, however, if they don't fit with how I feel the story should be going I'll go back to short.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2012 05:35 pm
Okay! good update,,,,,update soon
Author's Response:
Thaaaaaaaaaaaanks! Lol
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2012 09:23 am
Good update . Maybe Emma loved (as in depended on )George too much even from the beginning . It's like he has always been her only thought while she was kind of an after though for him even as youngsters and now . I love the background information and I like Taylor but I don't want Emma to jump too far to fast . Off subject - Your in London ! I hate you !!! (JK) London is my Favorite city on earth . :)
Author's Response:
Emma won't jump Taylor's bones and she won't allow him to jump hers. She's not ready for that kind of relationship. She loves George too much, and although she really likes the guy I don't think it would work. Maybe in the future, but definitely not now.
Yes, I agree, she depended too much on him and frankly what I want her to do now is to become to some extente emotionally independent. If that means not being with George so be it, but I really hope they sort it our because I love them together. They were really happy before the mess. In fact, I'm gonna write about their life together before they divorced.
London is lovely, however I'm going to leave the city when I go to Uni next autumn. Can't wait because I can't take the traffic anymore, but I know that I'll come back once I get my degree. If you even come to London, let me know! :)
[Report This]Date: October 14 2012 05:15 am
Emma is broken, and it's George's fault. He has caused her to loose faith in herself and in the decision making abilities. I am sucker for HEA's but George you might not get one dude. Your stupidity hurt three people and destroyed your family. There isn't enough begging in the world to save you, not even James Brown can fix this. You need to gain her trust, but her spirit is so broken that you may have lost her trust you forever.
Author's Response:
I always love your reviews. They left me up all the time, especially today because I have to do my hw and I procrastinated all day and my life is ruined and my teacher will hate me tomorrow.
Anyway...after going on Urban dictionary to find out what HEA meant (thank you for extending my lexicon) I have to say that I agree with you. Emma is almost damaged goods. She doesn't trust him nor herself. That's what happens when you use someone that would give everything for you. George is an idiot. Maybe he realised it too late. His final epiphany won't be able to help him that much. And now it seems that he has competition. How's that going to work? I'm really worried about what might happen next.
Thank you for reviewing. I adore you. Lol :)
[Report This]Date: October 14 2012 05:11 am
I like Taylor okay, but George and Emma just fit. How can she hop into another relationship without resolving her issues with George? Don't make his one of those, "She hopped in the sack with another guy, and suddenly realized that she really wanted what was at home" stories. You have already managed to let George steer clear of sleeping with other women. Let's not give her a torrid affair that she is sure to regret, when she patches up the tatters of her marriage, and her family. They have a real chance at building something together that is so much stronger than what they had before. Don't ruin it for them, before it has even begun.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. That is not going to happen. She won't be one of those 'oh, I' moving on today, but tomoroow I'll realise that I can't move on because I love you' women.
However I have to contest whether they'll be able to build something together at all. It might be too late....perhaps? But they have a chance and George has to play his cards right if he wants his woman back.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2012 03:36 am
Interesting update. Hmm, seems as if Taylor has more feelings for her than friendship. More please.
Author's Response:
Yes, maybe he does. But I don't know how's that going to be beneficial.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2012 03:27 am