Title: Chapter 6: Emma

Didn't like it. Please go back to George and Emma...This Taylor guy is a distraction she really doesn't need. 



Author's Response:

Sorry to upset you with my writing. That wasn't my intention.

Are you entirely sure that she does not need a distraction? Maybe she needs something else in her life, maybe George is not the right man for her anymore.

I think Emma is confused and sees Taylor as another way for her to go and move on with her life. She might be wrong. Maybe she just needs to solve her problems with George and get back with him.

Reviewer: Diane5566 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 15 2012 04:59 pm

Title: Chapter 6: Emma

Sorry but I really really hated this last chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you for your honesty.

George hates it too. :D

Reviewer: Suzanne5 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:11 pm

Title: Chapter 6: Emma

I for one would love for Emma and Taylor to be together. George is extremely selfish and is still not listening to Emma's feelings. He went on the date to pressure Emma to be with him. He lost an awesome person because he didn't know what he wanted. Give someone else a chance to be happy with her. Pls don't let Taylor suffer because George and Emma can't get their *beep* together. 



Author's Response:

I guess you are part of a small minority, Jaye. I remember asking one of my closest friend what she thinks Emma should do and she said: 'discard George and give Taylor a chance, or she just could be single to be an example to women that they can overcome bad situations and etc without needing a man.

I agree. George, as you said, did not know what he wanted, and he did wrong when he tried to pressure Emma.

Inevitably, someone is going to suffer, and that is the reason why I can't decide what is going to happen next.

I guess I need to get my beep together too.

Thank you for your review. It is deeply appreciated. I apologise for not replying earlier.

Reviewer: Jaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:36 am

Title: Chapter 6: Emma

Great update . Darcy was just too cute with his man talk with his father . As much as I love George and Emma together. Maybe it's time for Emma to have a little fun of her own with Taylor. ( ducks for cover from people throwing rocks) Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Aww thanks for your encouraging words.

Darcy is just amazing. I love that little man. Soon you'll see Emilienne too. 

Is Emma capable of having fun with Taylor without falling for him and complicate the situation even more? Personally, I don't want to put myself through the drama, but maybe Emma does! Lol.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 6: Emma

George you have got some competition for Emma's heart and the way that you broke Emma I'm afraid that you don't stand a chance.  I really want George to have a chance even if he doesn't know his head from a hole in the wall.  Thanks for the update, it was wonderful as usual!!



Author's Response:

I always love your reviews. They tend to put a smile on my face. :D

Wow. I've never heard that expresssion, the not knowing the different between one's head and a whole in the wall. I guess it means that he is clueless and incredibly stupid? I hope I don't misinterpret it.

I would love Emma to give a chance to George too, you know? It would be great for Emma to tell George: I love you, let's get back together!
I don't know if it will happen, though. I don't have to do what I want, I have to write what Emma would do, not me. Aww, sad.

Taylor seems like the perfect guy, but is he really the perfect guy for Emma? Maybe yes, or maybe no.

We will see. Not in the next chapter, but in the one after that. George doesn't like Taylor. I wonder why?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 05:24 am



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