Please come back and finish this story. It had an exciting start but now it's m.i.a. :)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 08 2013 04:36 am
Great update. Can't wait to see where this story is going.
Author's Response: Thank you! More is on its way!:) Reviewer: AP Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 31 2012 07:51 pm
Frankie you messed with good thing that Mark was receiving from Beverly, it's a good thing that he can get some later. Beverly a word of advice keep you nose out Mark's business, it's called "Plausible Deniabilty." What you don't know can't be used against Mark and his crew. Just be his woman and love him that is all that you need to do Bev.
Muy Excellene!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, he did, but Frankie's a nerd so...LOL! Yeah, Beverly is really nosey. Oh trust me she has seen alot of crazy things Mark and the crew has done! She would never go against them, they're like her second family. Beverly can be a little pushy sometimes! Muchas gracias!!!:) Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: October 29 2012 11:19 pm
Getting busy in the meeting room! lol! I'm glad Beverly is letting her man protect her. Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, they sure were! LOL! Oh Beverly is tough, she won't let him protect her for long! Thank you!:) Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 29 2012 09:11 pm
The flow in some parts of this chapter is kind of choppy but I do like this story so far
Author's Response: Yeah? Sorry! I try! Thank you!:) Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 29 2012 06:55 pm
Hey...that was way too short. I'm liking this story!! Update again very soon!
Author's Response: LOL! Sorry! Thank you! More coming out soon!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2012 01:47 pm
Wow Mark has a little freak in him lol. This war is going to be ugly and just hope that Mark and Beverly comes out of it ok. I wonder how these two meet? Thank for the update.
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, I just thought of him doing something like that, I don't know why! Yeah, this war isn't gonna be pretty! You just gave me an idea, for the next chapter! Maybe I should tell how they met! Your welcome, darling!:) Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: October 29 2012 06:20 am
I hope Bev doesn't get to involved and someone gets hurt because of it, or she gets hurt because of it! Looks like there will be trouble in paradise!
Author's Response: It's kind of hard for Beverly not to get involved. She loves the action and everything that comes with biker wars. Trouble will soon come! Then it'll get super interesting! Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: October 29 2012 05:00 am