I think they'd have to have a deep intense relationship if they've promised their children to marry.
Or they could be utterly ruthless and secretly antagonistical, hoping to gain control of the other's empires - thru sacrificing a child.
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 04 2013 05:31 pm
Maybe the dad could have a good relationship with the son, but thinks that an arranged marriage would make him happier. So he is doing from his heart and gives the son some hope that everuything will be okay and someone can love you in your condition?
Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 04 2013 04:25 am
There has to be something to be held over Cameron's head because once she reaches her majority she can undo whatever "arrangement" her father got her into. Unless the father has no idea what his arrangment is actually giving her which is her freedom.
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: February 04 2013 03:23 am
Probably a fairly cordial one since he wants to pawn his daughter on his son. And I would think, vice versa.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 04 2013 02:58 am
What does Camerons father do? Is he rich? Does he have global business interests? You hinted that him and Bastian's father were "close" at Oxford, but what does that mean? Have they kept in touch over the years? Do they do business together? How did the arrangement between Cameron and Bastian come to be? If theeir relationship is one of competition and blackmail, then it could explain why Cameron is being sent to the UK. It would be the perfect way to ensure the favorite son (Bastian) leads a normal life, if he is set up with a wife.
Reviewer: philly girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 04 2013 01:45 am
I Like the complexity of the story. Bastien and Cameron are more a like then it appears. Each have controlling and domineering fathers.
As to the fathers relationship to each other, I see them as being more about social status then anything. There "A" type personalities, who are very competitive.
Date: February 04 2013 12:24 am
I like Judahlove Anonymous idea that the two fathers relationship should be a relationship where we question their motives at first. But in the end they are actually very close like brothers. I do like the idea that the two fathers might have made the pact in order to protect Cameron from her mother and in hopes that the two would fall in love with each other and heal each others wounds.
Reviewer: AvidReader28 Signed [Report This]Date: February 04 2013 12:17 am
First thought: Bastien isn't his or he believes he's another Kai's kid
Second tonight: his father is envious of his son's accomplishments
Third: he's just an unpleasant SOB
Date: February 04 2013 12:01 am
I think it should be a relationship where things are not what they seem, where you actually question the motive of both involved. It seems like its a pact between two good friends and Cameron father seems weak and easily maniuplated by the wife. but is he? Is he as pliable as she thinks?
Why would Bastien father arrange a union for him years before his accident. to what gain? Is it finacial or love for a childhood friend, a way that they've come up with to free Cameron from her mother clutches and now they hope that the two will fall in love for real
Reviewer: Judahlove Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 03 2013 11:50 pm
It's a good start. May I suggest you need to flesh out your story a bit. It seems a bit stilted and one dimensional---this is definitely more for the second chapter than the first. But I would like to know where this is going...because I don't get how Cameron's father agreed to something like that. Unless he was duped, but then Cameron could always ask him and if he said yes he agreed to the condition--that's super weird and contradicts the idea that the dad really cared about Cameron. I'd like to see where this goes so far.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2013 03:22 am
please update with soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 30 2013 05:06 am
I love the premise of this story
I will pant for regular updates
I sure hope Bastien walks again
Reviewer: kitty Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 11:14 pm
Really really, good please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 04:42 pm
It's a great start
Reviewer: kier101 Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 02:36 pm
Interesting start on both starts. when will they meet? Will B know that he's to marry Cameron? How will she react to his disabilty? I don't think it should matter that he's in a wheelchair. imperfect princes are more human. Despite the tingling in his foot/leg, I don't mind that he's in a wheelchair.
The only thing I would mind would be an ugly triangle between A, B and C. LOL, did you choose those alphabetical names intentionally?
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 02:20 pm
Thank for the update...thanks for telling us how he was injured. At least he can feel something.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 02:12 pm
Good thing is that even though she is forced to go, they can't force her hand in marriage. Therefor, all she has to do us keep her heart to her self. Tough task, but we will see how she handles it. Btw keep up the good job. :)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 01:14 pm
An update!!
I feel for Bastien. He's going to explode holding all this in. He's going to have to hash this out with Alec. And Alec is going to carry this guilt for life, really. How could he not?
Great!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 05:53 am
good story, i have a feeling that Cam is going to help Bas walk again but it wont be easy... hope you update soon
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 05:03 am
This was so sad, I want Bastien to have a miracle!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 04:35 am
Me likey!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 04:27 am
update soon =] i thought we would had read about her meeting them already.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2013 04:01 am
Interesting start. More Please!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2012 04:54 am
I Loved it! I feel so bad for cam =[ update soon !!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 06:46 pm