That's Right Girl, make him beg! Before, you take his case!
Author's Response:
Oh, but Nick isn't good a begging...
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 27 2013 03:09 pm
Ok, who is lying and why is she sending her child with federal agents? Is she in witness protection or something? This story has me really interested..
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2013 02:51 pm
Wow, that was deep! If tbis is based on an actual event....wow I Am Intrigued! I give you a 10 for your bold boldness!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2013 12:28 pm
Such vile evilness
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2013 02:20 pm
Trying to use Via because the victim is black. Just evil, don't' fall for the bs Vi!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2013 02:19 pm
Please do not let Vi soften and take the case. I can't stand Nick or Helen they are both munipilator's. They are used to getting everything they want and then some legal or not. I don't hold them being rich or wealthy against them. I just do not like their attitudes. I would like to think that Nick did not violate Takisha, but who knows. Maybe someone is setting him up. Still, they can find another lawyer maybe not a black woman, but a lawyer just the same who can do the job. Nick and Helen seem to be dirtier than dirt and although Vi has history with Nick, I hope she does not get back involved with this jerk.
Whatever he said he felt for her whether real or not sounds like a lie. So far Vi seems convinced not to help, but I do not trust Nick or his wife. They could try to blackmail her, pay her a billion, or threaten her. I hope she falls for none of it. Even though she loved Nick, she does not want to be apart of that a-hole's life. I believe he is capable of anything when he wants his way. I am not saying he committed this crime, but I don't think he has any problems doing anything illegal to get what he wants. That's just common sense.
Author's Response:
I like the way you think!
Reviewer: Shana Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 22 2013 03:47 am
I want to know more so I can figure her out.. She seems vindictive but I want more proof.
Author's Response:
You'll have it and then some!
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: February 20 2013 03:29 am
Interesting story so far.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2012 02:56 am
My first review didn' post so i'll give it another try..
Great update!! Looking forwasrd to seeing where you take us on this ride.. I would if your thoughts are the same as mine... Only time will tell..
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2012 03:22 pm
I've read your work sporadically over the last few months. Its good, but when I dip out for a few there is usually so much to catch up on! I'll watch that, but I really want to see what you do with this; and you've warned this is gonna be huge! I applaud you for taking the case and subject matter on!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the confidence, but I think what you might want to to is just get The One as a book separetly, so you don't have to catch up on my schedelue but can pick up according to your own time, and can actually enjoy more the rest of my postings here on the other stories.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2012 06:04 am
Intriguing...very much so. Definitely looking forward to more. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
You're welcome.
Reviewer: idriveavitz Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 15 2012 04:07 am
Interesting start! More please!!
Author's Response:
It's coming!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2012 04:20 am
whatever you do, please, make the DSK character physically attractive. the real DSK is gross.
Author's Response:
Hmm, not sure how to respond to this....
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder?
Reviewer: Anti-DSK Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 10:28 pm
So this is about the whole DSK scandal, right?
Author's Response:
Indeed!
Reviewer: Eloise Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 09:55 pm
Wow, what a very dramatic start. I am very interested to see how this plays out. Please update soon. :)
Author's Response:
Well, get comfy, this is going to be a long and hard road to take...
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 07:19 pm
Good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 04:45 pm
Damn! You startec this story with bang. Please continue.
Author's Response:
It's coming!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 02:42 pm
Another great start. Can't wait for more soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 03 2012 12:27 pm