Love it!!
I do agree with her friend Drew. She is a free woman who is in complete control of her body, she seems to concerned about being bought. Does it really matter? There are so many women who sleep around for free yet that is ok because you aren't being paid? To judge her for that seems hypocritical because at least she will be evolving herself with someone who can help her dreams come true and not some loser who most likely has nothing. My friends laughed at me for feeling this way because I am a virgin and do not plan on losing it until I fall in love. However, for Kai's character and a lot of women who don't feel the same way I agree with Drew, what's the big deal, they call our generation the "Hook-up Generation" so at least Kai will be getting something great out of the deal, good sex, her education paid for, and one million dollars so I say DO IT KAI!!! It's OK to be a liitle selfish and put yourself first, it's their marriage so let them worry about it, they made those vows not you, again I say DO IT KAI!!!
Who cares about what could possibly happen, no one can tell the future, if all involved are of age and consenting adults then I say "have fun". I can't wait for the threesome to begin, it will be a fun read.
Update Soon!!!
[Report This]Date: December 22 2012 06:21 am
Everyone knows this is the hottest story on the Web site right now. I want to read more immediately. I'm contemplating not reading anymore until you're deep into the story so I don't have to hang on pins and needles after reading one pithy chapter.
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2012 06:08 am
I'm literally sitting on the edge of my seat! This story is amazing!
Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2012 05:41 am
Girl! Please do not keep us waitin! I love this story! The characters are awesome!!!
I can't stand Charlotte for some reason lol
GREAT STORY! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2012 01:36 am
LOVE THIS...please update soon!
Reviewer: Asc90 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 20 2012 12:23 am
Wow... the second was better than the first.
I can't wait to see what Kai does because she needs the intership, she needs the money, she needs the new position and she hasn't had sex in a while.
It looks like Dean and Char are about to meet her needs but I wonder what will be Kai's stipulations.
Reviewer: natalieiw Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 20 2012 12:05 am
This story stuck to me for a while, and I had to ask myself - why would an intern be pitching Nike? If she's a junior or sophomore on internship, wouldn't she be doing more tame things like making copies, fetching coffee, sitting in on meetings, taking notes, that sort of thing? I understand, that she has to be in a catch-22 position for the proposition to work... but that's a stretch.
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 09:24 pm
Very hot. I love it. Dean is a jerk but I at least admire his loyalty to his wife and to his brand/business. On some subconscious level he always dug Kai. His wife was/is right about that one. Great stuff here.
Reviewer: MadameZenobia Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 08:56 pm
Omg! This fic is so good. I am addicted already and I'm excited for chapter 3! I hope Kai gives in soon....
Reviewer: Cherry101 Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 07:18 pm
Kai has every right to be upset and insulted. She is basically being used. I hope you don't go into that territory of cockolded wives. It just reeks of slavery. Seriously. I don't mind the threesome, but why do they have to use her?
Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 06:50 pm
Awesome start, looking forward to some more.
Reviewer: cheer jam Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 02:33 pm
Wow. This is an awesome read! Dean, Charlotte, and Kai. What an explosive trio indeed!
Reviewer: Singinangel12 Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 02:21 pm
Wow! I will flip out if Dean starts to fall far Kai as much as his wife. Because right now, Dean is against this, and really, I can't blame him; who wants to share their spouse, even as gorgeous as Kai may seem. Then, I feel for Kai because she is trying to get her career together, go to school, and then BAM! she is hit with this twisted proposal by the head of the company. I hope Kai continues to stay no. But, I have a feeling Dean is going to break out the big guns, whatever those are and try to make Kai an offer she can't refuse. Then again Charlotte may do it, since this was all her idea anyway. That's usually how it works, the most rich and powerful sometimes tend to be the most freaky, lol! But anyway, great update.
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 03:12 am
Well, I'm not sure what's going to happen next but I wouldn't be surprised if Kayleesi loses the jitters around Dean, gets totally hardcore on doing her work excellently, puts him in a professional cold freeze and THEN he'll be attracted to her. That's if she doesn't sue which I don't think she will.
I'm not a fan of threesomes in life and not too much in fiction but this is really interesting. Can't wait for the next turn.
Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 02:23 am
I'm telling you, this is my favorite thus far. I'm so hooked on this story.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2012 01:07 am
Intrigued...to see where this one goes.
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2012 11:52 pm
Interesting chapter. He knew exactly what he was doing. I can't wait to see how he fixes it.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2012 10:02 pm
This right here is some good stuff!
Cant wait for next update...
Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2012 10:00 pm
Damn, why make him do something he don't like. It's going to back fire in the end.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2012 09:46 pm
Oh I am so interested to see where this story is going. Dutifully waiting for the next update.
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2012 08:16 pm
I feel like there is something more going on here, with Dean and Charlotte. Its interesting seeing how he's willing to do anything for his wife. Maybe something happened in the past, that he deeply regrets so he gives his wife everything she wants.
Charlotte acts like a child in my opinion. You don't makes threats about divorce, especially about something soo stupid. Your husband does not want to have a threesome, he doesnt want to share, he doesnt feel comfortable. As his wife she should respect that and move on. Instead she throws a fit and makes comment about divorce. Dean obviously loves her, and I feel like shes taking advantage of his love.
But I can tell that this is going to be a great story! I love all of your stories and I'm already feeling like this one is my fave just after two chapters lol.
Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2012 07:05 pm
I find it interesting that Char is the one who wants a threesome. The fact that Dean is so against is a great reversial of the stereotypical gender roles. Threatening divorce is an over the top reaction. There has got to be more to Char's reaction. Dean seams perfect on paper: rich, successful, powerful, handsome and good in bed. What more could his wife want? Hmmm! I am glad didn't go for it. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Reviewer: Janol Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2012 06:34 pm