Reviews For Trois
Title: Two

I'm not sure how to feel. I'm kinda glad Dean isn't attracted to Kai and I'm kinda not. But he gets brownie points from me for not wanting 3rd wheel in their marriage.

Reviewer: sojo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 06:33 pm

Title: Two

I really like your story, please update soon. How is he going to fix it? Why doesnt he feel attracted to Kia?

Reviewer: tisha123 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 06:28 pm

Title: Two

Ok, I was reserving judgment until further development but Charlotte behaves like a petulant child who is used to getting her way. Your husband doesn't want a threesome so you threathen him with a divorce? Okay, girl.

Like others, I am curious to know why Dean is so submissive to her. It goes beyond the regular desire to please your significant other.

I am glad Kai left like she did. Btw, she has grounds for a sexual harassment lawsuit, js xDD

Reviewer: paayush Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 06:15 pm

Title: Two

This story is very interesting and I am enjoying it immensely. I don't think I'ge read anything like it before or if I would enjoy it but I am quite pleased to say I am. Can't wait till the next update which I hope all be soon.

Thank u for sharing.

Happy writing!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:26 pm

Title: Two

You are amazing!! I absolutely love this story. Poor Kai....I think she's crushing on Dean and truth be known I think Dean likes her more than he's letting on. Great story...update soon!

Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 03:29 pm

Title: Two

Wow. This is all about Char. She might want to spice up her love life, but what she seems to really want is Kai. And where Dean is used to getting what he wants, Char seems to be used to getting Dean to get what she wants. And homegirl wants her some Kai and bad. And what is interesting is that Dean seems to be pretty freaky in bed (notice the reference to Char wanting to do disgusting things to Kai and Dean's repsonse), so what ELSE does this woman need?

I'm extremely interested to learn more about Dean and why he is the way he is. He worships that woman and evidently willing to do ANYTHING for her. Was she his first piece or something? I get the feeling this will be an exercise in self-discovery for Dean and for Kai. Not so much for Char. I think this chick knows exactly who she is and clear about what she wants.

Looking for anothe jaw-dropping chapter, 'cause this one sure as hell was one. I had to take a mo to pick my mouth off the floor. Well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 12:53 pm

Title: Two

hmmmm.  I think Kai may agree to a sexual relationship with Dean, but not with good ole Char.

 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 09:49 am

Title: Two

Am really liking this story. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 09:14 am

Title: Two

That was to be expected. Charlotte is a bit of a selfish cow.

Reviewer: bambi4real Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 08:12 am

Title: Two

O.M.G.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 07:33 am

Title: Two

His reluctance to the whole thing makes me feel like he might be afraid to have strong feelings for someone like Kai. And what I mean by that is someone that can screw up so much and of course not be his wife since he's utterly convinced that she (Charolette) is the only one for him. He had to have his wife tell him that he looks at her a certain way. Or maybe I'm just reading too much into it? What I'm trying to say is that I love this story and please please PLEASE continue.

Reviewer: LuKohana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 07:24 am

Title: Two

Wow!  Really nice

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 06:01 am

Title: Two

I'm completely enamored with your story.

I re-read Lila's Thunder for the 10th time. 

And this story?

 

You have a way with words. I feel like I'm literally in there with them.

 

I hope you'll be updating this frequently. I am hooked! 

Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:58 am

Title: Two

Oh I'm so freaking ecstatic by Kai's reaction! That Charlotte is a piece of work; I don't blame Kai, I would've been insulted too. Kai was only being nice to her - respectful to the boss' wife, not sending vibes of seduction! Kai appears to be a nice person who's trying to make something of herself which doesn't include fulfilling the fantasies of some rich blonde wife who's obviously bored with her gorgeous husband. Kai has a thing for Dean, of that I'm sure. It's going to be interesting I'm the office, how will Kai act around Dean now? And what thoughts does Dean have in regards to Charlotte's smear about possibly leaving him? it should be crystal clear where they stand in their marriage. Good story Voices!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:35 am

Title: Two

Flawless...I was wondering how you were going to do it...how to bring out the "business proposal"....esp. considering how they do not get on in the office and the fact that its the wife's idea...but this is believable...thank you for pulling it off. I cant wait to read more.

Also looking forward to LT and Stereo's updates...I cant wait!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:33 am

Title: Two

I'm interested to see where this story is going. I'm enjoying your writing. Can't wait to see what makes Kai change her mind because obviously she does change her mind and go through with it. Can't wait for next update.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:26 am

Title: Two

I think the points that Dean brought up about him not being enough and not wanting to share Charlotte are valid. And the fact that she was insinuating she may leave him over his feelings only give credence to his fears. I like Kai and I think she deserves more. I don't know that this will work out for any of them.Great story!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:15 am

Title: Two

Good update . WOW ! I love how Charlotte has Dean wrapped around her finger. Can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:15 am

Title: Two

Omg no words like wow.  I with Kai i been out that door real quick. I understand that Dean loves his wife and willy to do anything for her but come on if she wants a threesome that bad and you are not enough then something not right with you two. All i can say i'm loving this story and can't wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work and thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:13 am

Title: Two

Well damn. That was good. I haven't ...I can't....words....clearly they fail me right now. I ....damn. This is good. I want to know what happens! I want to know how on earth will Dean DuPont make this up to Charlotte, and make this up to Kai. I gotta know what happens. 

Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 05:10 am

Title: Two

This story is so intriguing. I am very much hooked and enjoy the stories i have read of your. Always very complex. I never really know which way i want the character to go.  I am so happy kai didnt accept offer right away. I dont like how dean thinks she is so incompetent yet is willing to give her such a huge promotion for sex. I guess that type of stuff happens inreal life. Very happy she turned it down. i want her to prove herself to dean and earn that job... And he fall in love along the way after the threesome. Great story.

Reviewer: Tiana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 04:56 am

Title: Two

I love it. I wonder if Dean will fall for Kai once the threesome begins, I don't know how Char will handle that, she might love it. I can't wait for the next update, I'm hooked.

Update Soon!!!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 04:43 am

Title: Two

I  really don't like Charlotte, and I glad that Dean did what he did.  There is no way to fix without Kai suing him and that company.  I really don't Kai to lower herself, but at the same time I want Dean to fall in love Kai and leave the ho his wife.  Yep don't like her at all and I am not feeling too good about Dean right now either.  Charlotte the ho has put him in a difficult spot, she does not deserve him!! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 04:40 am

Title: One

You made my night. I am glad that Kai didn't immediately agree to that "proposal." I am so intrigued by this story. I can't wait to see where you are going with this story.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18 2012 04:38 am

Title: One

This is a promising start. I am intrigued. I don't like lesbian fiction and this has the shapings of one. I hope the story line of Dean and Kai over ride the Charlotte wants to experiment one.

Reviewer: bambi4real Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 05:22 pm



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