dang busted!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 09:07 am
Aaaaaand James was the perfect (missing) touch to this story. Don't get me wrong, it was always great, but it was missing that villian lurking in the corners, ready to make complicated matters just a tad bit worse. Now I am fully prepared for this story, and will be checking for updates so don't brek my heart (please)
Reviewer: LuKohana Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 07:47 am
Wow, so Dean knows alot more about Kai than she thinks... hmph. At the rate this attraction/connection between Dean and Kai is going, I think once their arraingment starts Charlotte is going to end up the odd one out if she's not careful. And what does James mean, stay out of his way? It's not like she's gunning for his job. He's been a secretary for this long and now he wants to get catty? smh.
Reviewer: sojo Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 06:54 am
Well let the crazy passion hot hot sex begin lol. James is how can i say it jack ass and don't trust him. Just have that feeling. So looked foward to see what happen next and I belive dean is going to fall in love with her big time. Love this story it amazing and thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 06:01 am
James bears watching, I don't trust him. Dean is very attracted to Kai and as been for years apparently, he's going to fall hard and I can't wait. I want Charlotte to loose Dean and his money. Have I said that I don't like Charlotte? She makes my teeth itch!!!
More please!! This is so good.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 05:54 am
Great update . Damn poor Kai , I hope she watches her back with Jmaes around. Can't wait for more .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 05:54 am
Holy cow girl...This story is amazing!! I had to read it twice becuase its soooo hot....Bring on the good threesome, lol
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2013 05:22 am
Please update soon. :) great job btw
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 03:45 am
Oh my James is something else. Dean is getting off in his office, oh my.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 02:26 am
OMG can't wait to see what happenes next.!
WTF is James problem.?!?
Reviewer: TiesThatBind Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 02:24 am
WOW! I dont know how you did it....but you did it and did it beautifully, seamlessly, as always. I was hesitant reading about this story because of the subject matter involved (threesomes)...but Im so glad I did (only because it's written by you)...the dialogue delves into the depth of the matter on so many levels. Its not one dimensional (and it shouldnt be because of who they are and what they will be doing)...and its sooooo satisfying. I LOVE GOOD QUALITY WRITING. Thank you. I cant wait to read more.
If youre published please let me know the titles of your work, Id love to own them.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 02:15 am
Awesome. I love the new banner, its HOT!! Kai needs to be wary of James. I am ready for the trois, I am interested to see how this goes.
Update Soon!!
Date: January 03 2013 02:12 am
Delicious from beginning to end. I was so hoping you would update again tonight but I'll be patient...well not really. Please update soon!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 01:58 am
I am so pump about this story. I am so looking forward to Kai meeting up with Dean and Charlotte. Sexy time.....
Reviewer: Cherry101 Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 01:52 am
Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.
Dean is hot. He knows just what to say.
And James! That sneaky little bitch.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 12:40 am
You can't stop there I need more! LoL.....Oh Lord doesn't Dean or even Charlotte for that matter see the mess they are walking right into? Dean clearly carries a torch for Kai and I think once this trois starts its only going to start burning brighter. Dean andd Charlotte might not be living happily ever after for too much longer.
& James - was not expecting that. If he finds out what's going on, all hell might break loose. Can't wait for the next update.
More soon please!
Reviewer: Nicci Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 12:33 am
This story is great. I just wish you hadn't named two male characters with similiar sounding names (Dean and Drew). There was even one spot where you made a mistake and called Drew "Dean" and I got confused about who was saying what about whom.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for pointing that out. I didn't even realize I myself was getting them mixed up. Though it's too late to change their names I'll be sure to stay on top of that. Good eye! ;)
Reviewer: CurlyQ Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 12:31 am
This story is great! I'm super excited to see where all of this is going. And James seems like he's going to stir up some trouble!
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 12:06 am
oooo, this story sounds sex and interesting. I love how Dean is open to Charlotte's idea on making the bedroom scene more sexy.
Cool Story, I will keep reading!
Reviewer: Nsablo Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2013 12:06 am
Uh-oh, shit just got real lmao.
At first, I thought James was going to have a crush on Kai. But this is even better! I love that someone at the office isn't oblivious to the change in Dean & Kai's relationship, it feels realistic.
Love the update ;)
Reviewer: paayush Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 11:59 pm
And office intrigue on top of it all! wow.
Dean is funny: 'I won't.' Poor boy is already gone, but just doesn't realize it. *chuckling*
Now, I'm wondering what you're going to do with Charlotte when the dust finally settles...
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 11:35 pm
great update...More please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 11:33 pm
I have a feeling he's going to fall for Kai. Also I think Charlotte is a lot more into women then she portrays.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 11:20 pm
Hello voices i give this story five stars its keeps you on your feet and amazing wonderful job. I would like to read more chapters please.
Reviewer: Aries21 Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 01:47 am
I know I might be in the minority, but I want Kai to hold out as long as possible; I actually don't want her to do it at all. She is right, in the real world this cannot end good, but you knows. Kai is right, Charlotte may love Dean, but she is not in love with Dean. For her to ask him to jeopardize what he has built just so she can get her freak on is completely selfish. Yes, she apologized, but still. Dean cannot say no to Charlotte. Plus, Dean was taking a HUGE chance in even presenting this to Kai. She could have as she said sued him and his wife or threatened to tell if they did not give her X amount of dollars; the list of things she could do is endless. But, Kai is not like that, thank goodness for Dean and Charlotte. But she is NOT stupid either. I so understand her wanting to be taken seriuosly and be respected. I hope she makes the right decision. More please!!
Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2012 12:11 am