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Title: Three

Really enjoying your story and am anxious to see how all of this turns out for the three of them. I feel like they are all going to come out winning, or all losing and heartbroken. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 12:41 pm

Title: Three

I was never a fan for literature with threesomes...and this is the first time venturing into that territory (all because its YOUR writting) and I have say I havent regretted it. I love how Kai and Drew argued the points across (same points going on in my head if I were put in the same situation), I find myself mentally nodding in agreement with every statement they said as to why they she should or shouldnt. I loved how you had Kai making real valid points but at the same time so did Drew and I cant hate him for it. And that confrontation in the boardroom was a killer. I was also greatly surprised when you had Kai ask that number one question and coming back to it again pressing the point of knowing the answer. I wanted to know the answer too. Ive never been in a situation even remotely resembling this but if I were, your story would be on point. Its totally believeable. I LOVE GOOD writing. 

Thank you. You are a brilliant writer. You probably already know that but I wanted to tell that all the same. 

 

Merry Christmas and Happy, Prosperous New Year!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 05:07 pm

Title: Two

Whoa! this is the sh*t!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 02:11 am

Title: One

Ooooh this is goood!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 01:55 am

Title: One

I'm curious to see how Kai is going to justify this to herself. Also, she needs some kind of protection for herself, as she is clearly the weakest part of this equation. Maybe in the form of a contract between her and the couple...

I'm also amazed at how Charlotte may actually be chosing her successor. Already he's making comparisons...

Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 05:09 pm

Title: Three

Okay, I'm sold. That was a very hot interaction between Dean and Kai. I love that Kai is not wlling to play the victim. She's got fire!!

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 04:07 am

Title: One

Woah, I really like this story. Looking forward to how it's all going to play out. I can see lots of drama and jealousy from the three, particularly from Charlotte. Can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: nononsense Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 03:42 am

Title: Three

I am so excited about this story!  I don't think this is going to end well for Charlotte.  Kai just got sexY!  I absolutely love Drew!  

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 01:29 am

Title: Three

I love this story so much. Very well written and quickly becoming one of my favorites right now. I'm going to put my two cents out there on Charlotte since everyone else is haha, um...she is very cunning. I think she indeed does have some type of endgame with this but I'm still trying to figure out what it could be. Either way, Kai agreeing to the deal can not end well, I just don't see how willing becoming involved with a married couple can turn out okay. Drama is definitely going to ensue and I'm anxiously awaiting to see it all unfold. Keep up the amazing work. 

Reviewer: gentlehaikus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 01:20 am

Title: Three

Will dean leave Charlotte for Kai? I know it's too early to tell but to put this man into this position is just wrong on so many different levels. Thanks for the update. It's a great read as usual.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 23 2012 12:42 am

Title: Three

I think this is my new hot steamy series.

 

I check the site everyday looking for  your next chapter.

Reviewer: natalieiw Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 08:43 pm

Title: Three

I agree with Kai best friend weather she belives it or not she in control of what and how this threesome going to happen.  You can tell the bond that Dean and Kai have with each other and I belive it will grow more over time and might fall in love with each other.  This is amazing story and love reading it thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 07:20 pm

Title: Three

I am really interested to see how is storey is going to play out, please dont keep us waiting, I believe this is the best story that I have read in a really long time. I truely wonder if his wife and him actually have the perfect marriage, if she really love him; because if she did would she ask him to do that? I also think that Dean and Kia will end falling in love with each other and I also hope that will this new found inforation that Kia start believing in herself and do better at her job. Maybe take him by surprise....

I really don't like her mother, it actually took  me by surprise but I really sone think she is going to be a good character at all.

Reviewer: tisha123 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 05:13 pm

Title: Three

Please UPDATE this story soon, it become my new obession

Wow the image you used for Kia is perfect by the way

I can not wait for an update, she has to say yes, like one miilion? really? I woder though how they will get into it.... Regardless love it so far...

UPDATE SOOON PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: tisha123 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 05:07 pm

Title: Three

that man is an idiot.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 04:57 pm

Title: Three

So far this is a amazing story. Its been a very long time since a story on here has been this good especially since its just started. I beleive Charlotte likes woman just wont admitt it to herself. Thinking Dean is really getting know the real Charoltte. Like Kai said if she loved her husband she would have never asked that of him. I can tell this is going to be a very interesting ride you have for us. I have my fingers crossed that Dean wil fall in love with Kai and dump his wife

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 04:54 pm

Title: One

All i keep thinking is how this is going to end! I'm so very intrigued to see where this goes. Keep up the good work. I'm in this story till the end. it holds my attention. Can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 04:52 pm

Title: Three

I hope he leaves his wife's ass. 

She is too much. Doesn't seem to understand the negative consequences that will occurr. 

 

And for him to do that to Kai, there are advantages and disadvantages. She's not forever broke and can actually do something with her life, but she is selling her soul at the same time. 

 

Reviewer: Leanna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 03:47 pm

Title: Three

Good update . Everyone is always for sale for the right price ... School, jobs ,everything . I like this story .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 03:41 pm

Title: Three

Kai is not as naive as I thought. Somehow, that makes this so much more interesting for me.

I think Dean is in for more surprises from Kai. And his wife has possibly bitten off more than she can chew. She seems to be all about getting what she wants. I'm not sure if she loves Dean or not. There just seems to be nothing but surface to her. Me, me, me, I want, I want, when can I get what I want. A nasty bit of work in that respect.

One reviewer asked the question as to whether she's just a ditz or a manipulative woman, I'll go with a bit of both. However, we have yet to see a more in depth internal dialogue from Char to see who she really is. I'm sure that's coming. But on the surface, one has to wonder why she wants to bring someone else into the marriage. And what does that say about what she thinks of Dean. I kind of feel a bit sorry for him. What made him get with her? Was she some kind of ideal that he had in his quest to better his life?

I'm OK with Kai doing whatever she decides to do. I'm just a spectator and along for the ride, and what a ride it looks to be. Enjoying the hell out of this, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 02:25 pm

Title: Three

Right now I am not liking four people in this story Charlottr the ho, Dean, Drew and her momma! Those people make my teeth itch! Drew is not good friend, who tells thrir best friend to ho themselves out? Dean your wife the ho does not love you kick her ass to the curb! I reaaky want Dean to fall in love with Kai and divorce the ho then marry his true Kai. I want Chsrlotte to be penniless as well as homeless! Can you tell that I don't like that ho? I don't want Kai's view of herself to tank, I don't want her to allow herself to be used. I akso want Charlotte to loose everything to Kai when Dean falls in love with Kai. So awesome!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 01:04 pm

Title: Three

I applaud Kai for having a moral compass but her friend Drew also has a point. On paper, sleeping with a consenting married couple and getting money as a bonus is not necessarily a bad deal.

What is worrying though is:

1) Kai's admiration for Dean might develop into real romantic feelings

2) The same goes for Dean. The cold mentor facade isn't fooling me

3) I don't get Charlotte, I really don't lmao. She sees that har husband is upset but she manages to bring the conversation back to her threesome idea with Kai. She's either ditzy as hell or one manipulative woman.

Amazing update. Three chapters in and I'm already confused. That's a compliment.

Reviewer: paayush Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 12:35 pm

Title: One

handsdown. one of the best fic i have ever read - amazing! thank you!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 10:41 am

Title: One

After only 3 chapters I can honestly say this is one of the best fics I have read. I'm so intrigued! Update soon.

 

P.S are you going to finish Lila's Thunder?

Reviewer: Cherry101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 08:30 am

Title: Three

I really love this story!

Reviewer: Singinangel12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 06:23 am



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