LOVED the update!!! Yes, please. I would love for you to write in Chase's POV. Oh, please. You are an author, you can do what you want! I cannot wait for more. Is it just me, because I totally believe Chase and what he said to Vincent. Chase went hard for a minute, lol!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you would love to read from Chase's POV. It was just an idea I had the other night, so I wanted to see what the readers thought about it before I did it. Lol Yeah, Chase did go hard there for a minute. Trust me, he is going to keep good on his promise ;) - Danielle Reviewer: oHH Signed
[Report This]Date: January 05 2013 06:54 am
I think it's him and her mom, I hope I'm wrong!
Author's Response:
You are wrong ;)
- Danielle
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 06:50 pm
I knew Vin was cheating on her. I hope Aubrey smartens up and drops Vin. He's a douchebag. Great update, although I wanted to scream at the cliffhanger. Can't wait for next update.
Author's Response:
Umhuh, I agree. She does need to smarten up.
Eh, sorry about the cliffhanger :)
- Danielle
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 08:12 am
oohhh is he kissing Kieth or is he kissing her mom.
Author's Response:
If it was Keith that woud be very umm, interesting. Its not Keith nor her mom. She's a new character.
- Danielle
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 11:56 pm
I love drunk Aubrey and even sober Aubrey when she's not around Vincent. She seems to lose all common sense and rationale when it comes to him. I'm ready for him to exit stage left. My initial thoughts are that she sees Vin with Keith. That makes sense to me. I also thought maybe it's her mom but I just can't see her uppity mom being that free, it would just be awkward. Update soon please, I'm liking this story alot.
Author's Response:
I like Aubrey a lot also, I just think that she needs to smarten up. I'm also ready for Vin to exit, see I am actually quite tired of writing his character. It would be very entertaining if it was Keith. To be perfectly honest I had not thought about it being him, until I recieved reviews from people guessing that it's him. You are right about her mom, it's definitely not her. I'm glad that you are enjoying my story!
- Danielle :)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 01:46 pm
More, More, More !!!!!!
Author's Response:
;)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 12:57 pm
Love drunk aubrey and theres tots about to be a scene!!
Author's Response:
Yes! There most definitely is about to be a scene ;)
- Danielle
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 09:39 am
Yeah, this is what she should be like all the time, instead of trying to anticipate an abuser.
I love Kelsie. And Dani.
Nice!
Author's Response:
I agree with this review 100 percent!
- Danielle
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 07:19 am
Okay...I'm not good at guessing but my thoughts are....Vin is with Keith!!! Yep!!! I bet he is loving all up on pretty Keith! But I've been wrong before ...can't wait to see what happens next. This story is becoming one of my favs.
Author's Response:
Lol, no Vin is not with Keith. Thanks for your review. I'm happy that my story is becoming one of your favs.
- Danielle
Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 05:51 am
Love Aubrey when she is not around Vincent. She had a good time tonight. I think I know what she saw Vincent doing and guess what I don't care and she shouldn't either (but I know she will). Chase is hot.
Update Soon!!!
Author's Response:
Me too. She really needs to kick Vin to the curb.
Yes, she will care, but I also think that she is going to surprise you also. Chase is definetly hot.
- Danielle
Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 05:46 am
To bad being drunk doesn't make her less stupid but she is more fun. But it would appear that Vin the little abusive prick is cheating on our Bre. How is she going to handle this and will she allow Chase to knock him the hell out? I would love for that to happen, that would make my day!!! IT would be priceless if Vinnie was with her mother. I don't trust that ole ho as far as I could throw her. Her momma likes Vin much to much for my liking.
Author's Response:
Love your review. It's long :) Hmmm, I would absolutely love for Chase to knock Vin out. That would be a very interesting scene to write ;) . Vin is not with her mom though. He is with a new character. Who is going to bring up some past history. There is a reason that Bre's mom is on Vin's side.
- Danielle
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 05:46 am
great update...please update real soon please.
Author's Response:
Thanks, and I will try :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 05:35 am
So, what did Aubrey see?
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
You will find out soon :)
- Danielle
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2012 05:21 am
Interesting update! Why is she tolerating this ill treatment by Vincent? What's up with her mom and Vincent? Somethings seems underhanded with that pair.
Author's Response:
Something is going on with Vin and her mom but they are not having an affair. You will find out what's going on soon :)
- Danielle
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2012 01:15 am
Oh man Aubrey's mum is a bit of a meany! And Vincent he's something else, it's sad that Aubrey can't speak up a bit more for herself. Anyway I'm really liking your story can't wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. Yeah Aulbrey does need more of a backbone. She will get one eventually.
-Danielle
Reviewer: Loop Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 11:15 pm
OMG, does he have to beat her to a pulp before she gets a clue?
And does the mother know that he beats her`?
Author's Response:
Maybe? ;)
& Yes she does know.
-Danielle
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 05:34 pm
Really like thi sstory, however something is off. Her sister and father know that he Vin is beating her. Does the mother know? Why does she not move out and live her live for herself? Doctor put in long hours that is a fact. Please allow her father to step to Vin and beat hisass. Give this girl some balls and a new pair of big girls panties, they dont have to be name brand either. You are only a victim if you want to be. Clearly she does not wish to be. GIVE HER SOME HELP!!! Great update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your long review. I love answering questions! Her father does not know, he just thinks something is wrong, he has not pieced everything together yet. Her mother definitely knows. Lol, I love the big girl panties comment. She will get some help eventually.
- Danielle
Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 04:46 pm
great update...more please
Author's Response:
More will be coming soon! :)
- Danielle
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 04:41 pm
Erm, I can't understand why Aubrey would allow herself to be treated like this. By her fiance or mother. They seem a little too close as well and I wouldn't be surprised if they weren't having an affair. Chase seems like he would be good for her, I just hope she realizes it before Vincent kills her.
Author's Response:
Lol, no they are not having an affair, but something is going on between them. Chase is going to be very good for her. (sigh) I also hope she realizes it, before it's too late.
- Danielle
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 01:30 pm
Is momma and Vin foolong around or do he have something on her mom.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I can't give to much away ;)
- Danielle
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 10:06 am
Oh snap I'm curious!! Mr.Frenchie is going to get rid of his ass! Is the mom white btw?
Author's Response:
Lol. Love your review! You are 100 percent correct about Mr.Frenchie ;). Her mom is not white. I will upload a picture soon, once I find one. To be perfectly honest I have only imagined what Vin, Chase and Aubrey look like.
- Danielle
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 09:09 am
Just help me to get inside Aubrey's head here. There is something going on with her, I know. Why is she so set on Vincent like this? And her mother? What's up with that?
Chase sounds ...whew!
Vincent makes my stomach churn.
Author's Response:
You will find out whats going on with Aubrey soon.
As for her mom, she is not having an affair with Vin, but there is something going on between them.
I hope that "whew" is a good one? lol
- Danielle
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 09:00 am
What in the world is going on with Vin and her mother. He must be sleeping with her.
Why is she staying with a man who hits her and she is a doctor..
Author's Response:
No, they are not sleeping together, but there is something going on between them. Just because she takes care of other people does not mean that she takes care of herself. Sometimes love can make you seem like a fool. This spell or whatever Vin has her under, will soon fade away ;)
- Danielle
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 07:24 am
IS Vin going to be in bad car accident and in a coma for years? Please, becasue Audrey is making me so angry. Why is she in denial about her feelings for that asshole? Vincent is woman beating maggot who should be under the damn jail with a shank in his heart!!! Her momma is the evil troll queen, please wake Bre up!!
Fabulous!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, no not a bad accident. I hate to say this, but Vin is alive and very healthy through out 'most' of the story. Aubrey does wake up & soon. Thanks to the help of her family, friends, and CHASE ;) of course.
- Danielle
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2012 06:35 am
No I read some stories and they are lacking detail, it just derails the whole story to me. Details make everything seem much more real.
Author's Response:
I agree :)
- Danielle
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2012 07:24 am