Sweet baby jesus I love this book! You removed the other stories you had up, which were amazing as well. But when are you writing the sequel to this?
Author's Response:
Thanks, for the review and the love! I am working on the other stories, but it is just slow going :-(. You can still find them posted on The Vault. Thanks again for reading.
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
[Report This]Date: September 05 2015 06:13 pm
LOVE THIS STORY!!! So glad you moved it from Shades to Valent!! I would love for you to start writing the sequel!! And if you need an editor, puhleeeeeaaaasssseeee let me know. I started out as an editor for Jaye Sims, and we are now co-writing on Wattpad. Anyway, BIG fan here. And no matter what you do...KEEP WRITING!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! That is very sweet to offer to help edit. I just may take you up in that. I am writing here and there but it is slow going. The story is oming together, but not at the pace that I'd like :).
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2015 04:24 pm
I admit it... I went to Google immediately for Mike Stefano and Irish Massey. Smh. Please continue this series!!! So good!! Mmm Irish.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed
[Report This]Date: May 18 2014 02:26 am
I want to slap you right now this was so good!!! I almost wish I hadn't read it until the sequels were complete. I'm over here trying to collect my thoughts like Irish just got through blowing my back out. This was one of the best erotic stories I have read. I'm a fan of literotica myself and I've read some smutty stories but yours is a more of an erotically sexy self discovery. Girl you did yo thang!!! Keep up the AMAZING work and hurry up with the sequels. I'll be going through withdrawl soon! Lol.
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2014 07:49 pm
This has been one of the sexiest and most entertaining stories i have read. I got sad everytime i saw it was getting closer to the end. Thank You. i hope you continue it.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2014 10:03 pm
AGGHHH!! Now you know you can't keep us waiting like that. Please, please, please continue. I want me some Irish too!!
Well done!!
Author's Response:
Irish is going to be so tired...it seems that he is going to be passed around. Everybody wants a piece of him :-). Working on part 2..it's coming.
Reviewer: M_Denise Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 08 2014 02:18 am
Please update soon!! I've been stalking this story....can't wait for the next chapter. lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for supporting my efforts. Enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: toniab Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2013 07:22 pm
Loving this story, please update soon i can't wait 2 c how they left things after such a hot night!
Author's Response:
I know right. Next chapter is in the works. Thank you for reading and leaving me a love note. Itreally helps me push out the next chapter.
Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 08:15 pm
Whew!!! All I can say is Irish is the effn truth....lol. I really loved this last chapter.
Author's Response:
Damn right he is the effn truth.! Next chapter in the works ;-).
Reviewer: ToniaB Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 18 2013 03:44 pm
Good start to the story. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: March 16 2013 02:23 am
Pretty damn nice anytime I think of Irish I see Mr.Norman Reedus with his sexy ass keep up the awesome work loving it.
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am. Your guy is a sexy bi$#!. stay tuned!!
Reviewer: toni174ever Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 07:54 pm
:)
Author's Response:
:-) You like that don't u....
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2013 04:54 pm
Shit. I love this, so fucking much.
Freaking beautiful and amazing.
ERMERGERD.
And hell yeah I peep literotica. ;)
Author's Response:
hehehe. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 09:23 am
Big fan of fresh, witty, sarcastic dialogue; you have it in spades...lol! I love this!
Ambi...a mess...lol! Just do it, there is no mystery here!
Irish...cant wait to see what he's all about!
Nice!
Author's Response:
Keep reading.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2012 10:10 am
Love it! Irish sounds delicious!
Author's Response:
Irish is delicious!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: December 30 2012 06:10 am
OMG!!! Yes, to all of your questions! I did meet that guy who just so happened to be an Irishman (who now lives in Amsterdam) and a Scorpio and I must say that I do believe this man was, dare I say, my "soul mate"! He captured my heart in one single night and I haven't been able to forget him since.... I still think about him to this day and it's been almost 8 months since that fateful night... I have not read this first chapter of this story yet but already speaks to me.
Author's Response:
Wow!!! You need to write a fic about that. I would def read it!
Reviewer: Angie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 30 2012 03:38 am
I love it! The dialogue is witty and the 1st person pov only makes it more hilarious. Irish is hot though. I can't wait for more of this delicious story. Happy New Year's!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :-)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 04:17 pm
"He was whispering something into dumb and dumber’s ears as he stared straight at me. It caused them to squeal like annoying little piglets." LMFAO!! I hardly EVER find myself laughing repeatedly whilst reading stories on here. This was so entertaining!! Why is this going to be so short?! I'm in love, this character is so badass. Please update soon and think about prolonging the story? Or write a new story with a character with a similar personality? I'm enjoying your fisrt person POV =]
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the feedback. I laughed a few times while writing too. I love Ambi and Irish, I love them together. So we will see where this story goes. Who knows, maybe we will see more of them later on.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 08:41 am
Love it! Keep going!! Update soon please!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. Updates are a comin'.
Reviewer: Kissrole Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 05:52 am
Loving this story already . Can't wait to read more .
Author's Response:
Thank you, More is on the way.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 05:21 am
Like the new story.
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and taking time to send me feedback.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 03:31 am
truely hot and sexy ... Irish
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 03:04 am
I liked it! I thought it was funny and hot!
More please.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. More will e coming up in the next few days,
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 02:58 am
Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. More is on the way.
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 01:55 am
Nicely done, kellyklue. I'm looking forward to reading more about Ambi and Irish.
Keeop up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. More will be coming up in the next few days,
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 29 2012 01:20 am