I think everyone is so caught up in the Irish trance, we've forgotten all about Jaime and his warnings. He spoke as if he knew a lot about Irish and was truly concerned for her ending up as just another notch on his bedpost. Curious about his role in this tale...
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
[Report This]Date: December 14 2015 02:37 am
It's goin DOwN!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I hope you've enjoyed it.
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: February 07 2014 02:09 am
Finally
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:-)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 05:49 pm
I like Ambi's "crazy thoughts". Very humourous. It keeps this story in perspective for me. Also, I'm not a big fan of urban speak (I know I complain about it often, in other stories, but it's mostly because it just doesn't fit the premises some authors present), but yours is fitting and you use it more so when the friends get together. Much more realistic and that way I enjoy the banter more. Well done. Will continue to read and leave my thoughts.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading.
Reviewer: foosrule Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 04:53 pm
This short story is sure packing a punch! LOL.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Thank you. Enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 09:39 am
I LOVE them! Yes I know I've said that already but theyre hilarious! anywho cant wait for the next update. And I love the length of the updates keep that up too. I hate short updates.
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am. I hate short updates too, so hopefully chapter will be about the same lengths.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 10:26 pm
She could just have him take her home. He'll no matter how hot he is give that man blue balls.
Author's Response:
Yes she could have but hey our Ambi is a special case :-).
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: December 31 2012 07:37 pm
Great update . Totally loving Irish ! More please .
Author's Response:
Thank you. Next chapter should be up in the next few days.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:34 am
Hmm, interesting start! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Next chapter should be up soon.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:17 am
Gosh I love this! Irish is hottttt!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Irish is hottt! Next chapter will be up soon.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:12 am
Take that, take that, take that...oh I'm weak. Ambi is hilarious. That's exactly what she needs to do though: stop thinking, shut her mouth and take that.
Author's Response:
:-) thank you for reading. I;m glad you are liking this story.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 05:07 am
Ok, umm...yeah. I'm afraid I'm with Irish on this one. No teasing! Everybody is grown here, so either put your money where your mouth is and back that shit up; or backYOUR shit up and be gone! What the hell was Ambi doing? She was all over the place like some lunatic. Aint that much dong in the world to act that much a fool over! Is she looking for some type of meaning here..lol! And she seems mad because he's not taking it for something more. But, why? Its a one night stand! It is what it is. No judging. In truth, they are complete strangers, and all she really knows is his name; but if that's what she (and he) wants, then what's the problem here? Actually, she seems more conflicted about her actions than anything.
LOL..Ambi needs to get it togehter here. She acting a little cray cray!!
Nice!!
Author's Response:
She is acting a little crazy. She is very concerned about what will people think about her. Especially Irish, she doesn't want him to see her as just a possible conquest, yet she was so quick to dismiss his actions. What does she want? Lol. Keep reading. Thanks!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 03:46 am
Ambi is NUTS. I love it. She had me rolling.
Author's Response:
:-) I;m glad, that was my intention. Ambi is nuts and I love that too.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 03:10 am
HOT DAMN.
*sigh*
Lemme just say it one more 'gain. HOT DAMN.
That is freaking all.
Author's Response:
Thank you ma'am!
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 02:54 am
OMG that was awesome. i cant wait until your next update. irish is one crazy sob.
Author's Response:
Next chapter should be up in next few days. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2012 02:52 am