I loved reading Ambi's inner thoughts during the sex scene. It adds just the right amount of 'chuckles' to the scene...making the naughty a tad sweet too. I like it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. And the added chuckles was what I wanted. Next chapter is on the way.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed
[Report This]Date: March 18 2013 04:49 am
All that talking. Just as sexy.
Author's Response:
All that talking...and they are both to hot for words!
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2013 04:42 am
beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Next Chapter is up!
Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 12:29 pm
After working a long hard day in a Dilbert world, this was a real treat. And I'll leave it at that 'cause I'm speechless. And Ambi is CRAZY. Hilarious. And I'm with you Ambi, I want you to make that man whimper. Don't go out like that.
Author's Response:
That man is going to be screaming her name...she's the Wrangler Damn it!!:-)
Thank for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 04:37 am
Amazing.
Author's Response:
:-)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2013 03:47 am
That was smokin' love how you write using the characters weakness for the other, it makes them have more depth. I am liking this story. I could stand to read 15-20 more chapters! The sex was worthy of a 10... I
Author's Response:
They are both weak for each other...whether they want to admit it or not. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 03:58 pm
That was sexy!
Author's Response:
It was....next chapter is up. Enjoy!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 15 2013 02:14 pm
OMG I felt like i just did irish! that was intense! Wonderful detailed chapter
Author's Response:
You did! We all did! :-) he is a fantasy...a sweet fantasy. Enjoy. Next chapter is up.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed
[Report This]Date: March 15 2013 10:10 am
That was sexy!
Author's Response:
Damn right it was sexy. Irish is sexy..... :-)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 06:26 am
Wow, that was one explosive (pun intended) chapter! You had me from the beginning...the moment Irish stepped into the club I KNEW it was going to be a good read. Your words are so descriptive; I'm not even into blondes but Irish is FINE AS HELL (he so naughty and nasty but I love it....and he can be a gentleman as well). This was honestly one of the best sex scenes I've read too (and I've read quite a few). You did your thing with this one--pat yourself on the back--not sure how I missed this story but I will be definitely following it now.
Author's Response:
:-) Irish is nasty...and hot as hell. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2013 12:28 am
Love thi story! Keep up the good work!
Nothin' finer than a man with a southern accent or an Irish accent.
Author's Response:
You're right about that darlin' :-). I Love a lazy southern drawl....
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 14 2013 11:20 pm
I'm cross-eyed just from reading this! Damn! I'm all for channeling your inner ho' in cases like this. Not every man gets to see her, you understand, but the ones who do, they must be bringing it like Irish is doing right here...lol! Good lawd!!
Irish is all like, I'm a man not a boy, don't play! Damn right!
You have to update this again...soon!
Author's Response:
Well Damn!! Crossed-Eye huh? I'm gonna need to re-read this chapter; again for the 100th time :-).
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 10:43 pm
HAHAHAHAHA!!! This was the jizzz...and I mean the shizzz! LMAO!! I loved it! Great work! I loved the build up and the tension. The inner dialogue is well done and brilliantly placed. Perfection..Now I need a cold shower and an update! LOL
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL......Thank you! I try...I'm working on my craft :-)
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 06:30 pm
Gj. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 05:58 pm
Great chapter.. Irish put it down on her.
Author's Response:
Damn right he did! Enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2013 05:49 pm