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Title: Half of Me

I was thinking about how irrelevant this chapter was until I got to the end. Good job

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2013 08:24 am
Title: Half of Me

WTH, is right. I would have found out something about him well before the tenth date.

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Date: March 07 2013 07:18 am
Title: Half of Me

wow love this story.. dying to see more daniel terri interactions..wow ian somerhalder is daniel that is so exciting...dying to see how he looks as a model...update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: January 20 2013 07:50 pm
Title: Half of Me

Grea!t next =]

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Date: January 19 2013 05:57 pm
Title: Half of Me

Very interesting. I wonder what Jerome is doing now?

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Date: January 19 2013 02:57 am
Title: Half of Me

Interesting update! Can't wait to see what happened next! Wow,was Jerome homeless?!!

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Date: January 19 2013 01:38 am
Title: Half of Me

So the roles are reversed, yet she's still the one dealing with a homeless person? I guess I have to wait for the rest because I still don't see why that would make her so unsympathetic, on its face. Unless Jerome did something else. There is a risk with that, now that she knows. We'll see.

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Date: January 18 2013 11:58 pm
Title: Half of Me

Uh-oh. What is Jerome doing?

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2013 11:31 pm
Title: Half of Me

Looking back on the past could be really hard especially when someone is living two lives. Jerome is trying to be someone else. 

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2013 11:18 pm
Title: Half of Me

Fantastic chapter, Terri's past seems interesting. Can't wait to read more!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2013 09:49 pm
Title: Half of Me

Jerome is homeless, first I want to know what happened that caused him to homeless?  Second, how long as he been homeless?  Third, has he stolen anything from Teri?  Fourth, does he expect him to invite him to stay?  I hope that Teri wouldn't be that stupid!!  What is a homeless dude doing macking on a women when he don't have a pot to piss or a place to lay his head?  Some nerve, Teri kick him to curb. 

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Date: January 18 2013 09:30 pm
Title: Half of Me

lovely update, please continue...MORE

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Date: January 18 2013 09:13 pm


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