I don't know if 10 chapters will be enough. Seems like it will take 9 chapters to get go the bottom of why Terri has such a bad attitude. I say give the story at the very least 20 chapters. 10 for Terri' s hangups and 10 for romance.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: May 31 2013 01:07 am
I like the story I just hope he mans up a little more stop being such a scaredy cat with her. I also hope she softens some no need to be so rude and mean to him. Its uncalled for and unprofessional besides being a turn off with her personlity. I love the fact she is a professional! Good job
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2013 01:05 pm
I did not rate/review until now because I wanted to get a feel in what direction the story was taking. Although it is early, I have a good feeling about the story concept, and I think although different from your other story it will be just as good, maybe even better than you will expect! So for right now I am giving you an 8.75.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2013 07:26 pm
Good update. I really liked this chapter . Sadly I can totally relate to Terri . Can't wait to read more .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 24 2013 06:03 am
I love your story. I hope Daniel is the one to break through that wall of Terri's.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 23 2013 12:19 pm
Terri's emotional wall is going to down like the Hindenburg! Daniel is sweetheart keep that asshole Alonzo away from him!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2013 11:32 pm