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Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Update.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 11:10 am
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Love this story so far. Can't wait to read more soon.

 Reviewer: Vava Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2013 12:16 am
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

I just discovered this gem and I'm loving!!! Can't wait for the next update!!

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2013 06:08 am
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

wow they want each other so bad

 Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2013 03:22 am
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

I'm proud of both of them...he isn't putting up with her running all over him.A+++++

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 03:35 pm
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Short but informative. Just what we readers needed! (Terri's backstory) I understand her more now. Wow, 17 years....I know when they do have sex it will be like she was a virgin all over again! Make sure they use birth control, because she may get pregnant that first time. Since Daniel is young and you know his little swimmers are strong and healthy!    They will be like heat seeking missles heading for it's target!

Now that would be one he'll of a phone call.   

Hello, mom and dad.....I know we haven't spoken in 10 years, but I just thought I would let you know,  I am pregnant by a 22 year old, formerly homeless man who,now works for me!  Of yeah, did I mention....he's white?  LOL!

That would be one hellified phone call! You may use that scenario if you like!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 03:34 pm
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

This was a great chapter.  So sad about her parents and she's an only child.  I hope her parents are still alive because I know someone who went back only to find their mother dead and buried and the family couldn't find them to notify them.  That is so sad.

I love that she's finally admitted to wanting Daniel and I can't wait until things go to another level!. As for 17 years, all I can say is 'wow'.  Daniel has a lot of 'dusting for cobwebs' to do.  LOL

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 11:04 am
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

I am playing catch up....I love your story please keep the updates coming

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 07:00 am
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

Yes, Daniel broke through Teri's wall.  It was little chink but it's a hole none-the-less.  Daniel refused to sign that contract with Alonzo and I thank the writing gods!!!  Teri is a hot mess she hasn't spoken with her family in years, what if her parents died?  SO stupid!!!  I love this story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 06:00 am
Title: Phresh Out the Runway

All right... Stake your claim Terri. YHeah, he's yours in all thangs. More, please.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 05:36 am


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