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Title: Stay

Daniel, is just the man for Terri! He is strong she is weak and vulnerable, and when he is weak, she steps in to build him up. Just like a loving couple. He is always there for her!  I can not wait for them to consummate there relationship. 17 years is a very long time without SEX! She could be considered a virgin again! I am glad he made her face her problems..this will make it easier for him to persue and persuade her into a relationship with him.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2013 08:07 am
Title: Stay

Loved the scene with her parents; it was emotional and loving. But my favorite scene was of Daniel laying with his head in her lap and Terri massaging his scalp as they shared a quiet moment in bed.  The words he spoke made me swoon!  i swear Daniel is da man!  The right MAN for Terri- so she needs to stop trippin' with the quickness!  He is more man than any wannabe in her age bracket!  He considers her needs, her feelings, her desires- and he's given her life anew as she'd done for him - a form of pay-it-forward in reverse. Terri needs to accept the blessing that is Daniel Jones and give him what he desires...in spades!

Great update! :)

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2013 03:18 am
Title: Stay

Still reading this awesome story!!  So glad to see that it is back!

 Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 06:49 pm
Title: Stay

Thanks for the update! 

Im glad Daniel is helping Terri work through her issues and realize that people do care about her if she will only let them in. Hopefully their relationship will only go up from here!

 Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 09:32 am
Title: Stay

This was a good chapter but I think he was wrong to take her to her parents' house without her knowing beforehand...you can't make someone face something if they are not ready.  However, I am glad that she made up with her parents; they seem to be a loving kind bunch of people.  I don't feel bad that she called him "little boy" and her "client."  Honestly, he is a "boy" compared to her but I guess "little" bruised his ego a bit...and as far as them being more than client/friend well...they are but it's not like they are an item.  I liked the chapter though.

 Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 07:27 am
Title: Stay

I  really like Daniel. He may be young in  years but he's definitely more mature than Terri when it comes to being in touch with who he is. Love their "relationship". So glad he took her to see her folks. I still don't understand why she shut them out of her life. But, they're back and that's all that counts.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 07:24 am
Title: Stay

So I am so proud of him! He is starting to put her in her place,  however that was pretty mean comment to him. Love the story missed it. thanks for updating!!!

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 07:12 am
Title: Stay

Daniel is really good for her. I'm glad she's softening to him. 

 Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2013 06:23 am


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