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Title: Jump

I don't understand Terri reaction! Years ago while she was so tender hearted she could get reid of the jerome guy and now that she is such a bitter and stronger person she is scared ?

 Not very logical

Besides if you don't want the guy to know too much about your life, don't even meet him at your house. Don't let him him

Buy a dog , have security alarm installed; record any threat or conversation on your phone, go to the police have a restraint order and then it's done ?!!!

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2016 09:04 pm

Title: Jump

On the one hand I understand why she couldn't think when she first met up with her past. Although I don't think I would have agreed to go anywhere with him. I would have created the scene instead. :o

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 07:53 pm

Title: Jump

Ok, I didn't see that coming...Jerome the formerly home guy, that caused Terri to go on a 20 year fast!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 07 2013 06:20 am

Title: Jump

Great update . I hope you have Fun in the UK !!! :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 04:45 pm

Title: Jump

I like this story and was happy to see there is an update. Now about this new chapter, I got to say I am a bit...disapointed. Firts, I don't understand Terri's reaction when she firts see Jerome : ok the guy was an ass, trying to live off on her and all, but it was more pathetic than anything else, and there was never any indication that he had beviolent or anyting. So bad experience 20 years earlier, I get that. But for her to be so worked up, and paralysed, and all that shit is a bit of an overreaction. Then, the "twist" with Jerome who turns complete psycho- stalker and "threaten" her 2 minutes after meeting her again, and she just...caves like that. WTF? She just up and agreed to go out with a man who she as not seen for 20 years and who threaten her (of what, it is not even clear). She beavec too stupid for her age and her social statut. Sh eis not an helpless 20 years old. This doesn't make any sens, it is beyond ridiculous, like drama for the sake of drama.

Reviewer: Hmmm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 01:27 pm

Title: Jump

What hell does he want? If it were me, I beat Jerome back into his momma's womb.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 08:31 am

Title: Jump

Really

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 05:41 am

Title: Jump

Excuse me but what the fu-...what the FREAK just !!?! Terri didn't do a dayum thing to that asshole...all his problems we're his fault not hers- but I know losers like Jerome- losers who try to mooch off of vulnerable ppl and drain them dry. And when said leaches have exhausted all your resources...they move on to their next target. He's just mad b/c Terri kicked his ass to the curb - literally - before he could completely use her. Slimy bastard!

It was completely stupid to fall into his trap. She have him WAY TOO MUCH power that he NEVER should have had access to. She should have cussed him out, and then called security on his ass AND filed a restraining order. He's running game on you girl!!! Extortion!
I wouldn't doubt that he knows Daniel or at least seen him on the streets. Daniel can handle himself. Puhleeze let Daniel follow her or stop the madness before she leaves with that fool!! Urgh!
thanks for the update, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 05:36 am

Title: Jump

Feedback.  U r planning an update before you leave. ..right???? Ijs Iove Daniel and want to....no I need to see him kick Jerome in his trifling Ass. Please and thank you.  Plus ...teri needs to go Jlo or Farrah Fawcett  on his weak A S S.

Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 05:08 am

Title: Jump

Wait...what?

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 04:52 am

Title: Jump

Jerome is an asshole!  What does his delusional self think that Teri did to him? He didn't have shit before Teri and still doesn't have shit. Why didn't she tell Daniel? She is still stuck on stupid I see. Please update soon!   Congratulations on studying abroad!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 02:21 am

Title: Jump

Why!Why! Would she have agreed to go out with that creep!  I would have gone straigtht to the cops!  What if he rapes her?  Blackmails her?  I can't beleive she's going out with him and not telling anyone!  I'm on pins and needles!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 02:07 am



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