Reviews For The Less Fortunate
Title: Mother Mary

Thank you for creating complex characters who walk through life's struggles together. I find myself mad at Terri but feeling sorry for her all at once. 

Ps - you had me at Ian. I don't know if I love this character because of my crush or because he's so lovable. Great story!



Author's Response:

wow. you're like one of the authors i really look up to on this site and this review honestly means so much to me!

haha i love ian somerhalder so much that there's no way i couldn't have used him in one of these stories lol daniel's lovely though, of course

Reviewer: M_denise Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2013 03:17 am

Title: Mother Mary

It's about dang time she gives those goodies up!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2013 04:32 am

Title: Mother Mary

That was crazy! Jerome was totally unexpected.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 11:49 pm

Title: Mother Mary

Actually proud of Daniel.. he's getting a backbone and not having her direct him all the time.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 08:40 pm

Title: Mother Mary

Yes!  Thanks for this wonderful update!  I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 12:21 pm

Title: Mother Mary

love it u rock more soon 5*****

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 04:42 am

Title: Mother Mary

It's not over and that crazy fool Jerome ain't done.  They really need to make police report.  Jerome used her and gave her an STD yet is angry at him for getting him beat up.  He stalked and plotted only to force her to have dinner with him by gun point.  Jerome needs to do and quickly!!    I like the explaination for his actions as it just proves how psychotic Jerome is.  I like how Daniel followed Terri and saved her but the question is for how long?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2013 03:44 am



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