Title: Chapter 1

 

Ding!! Ding!! Ding!! Updates please...

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 04:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

 

UPDATES!!!!!!

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 06:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

I don't mean to sound nit picky but as a med student wouldn't his hands be smooth? I mean if especially he wanted to be a surgeon or something his hands are his livleyhood. If he were to ever do anything that could potentially damage his hands I suspect he'd wear gloves. Idanno just something I thought about since I'm an artist and I go crazy when I feel like I'm doing something that could do damage to my hands. Even just them being dry is seriously a thing with me and some of the other visual artist I know. Other than that I really like this so far and will keep reading. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story, but I'm not sure where the med student part is coming from. If something like that is implied, then that was a complete accident because it isn't a part of the story. Sorry!

Reviewer: WafflesWithJelly Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 05 2013 12:07 pm

Title: Chapter 1

They miss each other. I think Lisa should tell Jae what's going on with her family so he won't be in the dark. Maybe they should talk about what both families expect if them and hopefully they can figure something out before gets too late and there's too much distance between. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2013 03:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I love Def Leppard.  The story is interesting. 

Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 1

When it comes to education and family Koreans are no exception. I understand the pressure he has to please his family and do well in america. Fate has a way of changing plans and what we thought we wanted changes. First impressions usually is the most important. So far so good.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Seems really interesting. 

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2013 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 1

OMG, an AMBW story. Makes me so happy. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nessa Bale Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 07:09 am

Title: Chapter 1

Good start.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 03:23 am

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Lisa is pushy don't like that about het!  More lo lease!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 02:08 am



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