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Title: Meetings

What is the other site this story is posted on?



Author's Response:

Wattpad and my username is the same as it is on here! :) 

 Reviewer: none Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 10:09 am
Title: Meetings

It's always just one drink. What's the worse that can happen? Everything!! LOl. I love how she carries herself. Most women find that attractive and acceptable behavior nowadays and the fact that she doesn't makes her a rare breed in itself. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 07:52 pm
Title: Meetings

I don't think you should be using a real person's name as a character in your story.  It is fiction, but anyone googling his name, this might come up and it seems like you are infringing on him personally.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you feel that way, but Colin is a celebrity. He's already in the public eye. So, it's not like I'm taking some little to unknown person and writing a story about them. Plenty of people create stories about their fave actor, actress, singer, athlete, etc. This is nothing new. This is a work of pure fiction. Nothing more. Plus, I highly doubt Colin would ever, ever come across my story. 

 Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:21 pm
Title: Meetings

ok im not one of those complaining readers that moan about thevstory not being to their liking but THEY ARE MARRIED & after that song & everything why didnt Colin have intercourse with his wife. Oral sex is fine but thats all. When the others got theirs in, so not fair. Where did Colin & the boys go. They need to talk.

 Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 05:25 pm
Title: Meetings

I am totally enjoying this story. So sorry to hear about your friendship.  Letting go of a lifelong friendship is never easy no matter the cause, so I'll be praying for your peace and continuous encouragement during this time.

 Reviewer: Kurious Kale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2015 07:57 pm
Title: Meetings

I am truly missing this story. What are the chances of a update



Author's Response:

Very soon ;)

 

-Amby

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2014 05:05 am
Title: Meetings

I love this story and I have to admit that I have been stalking this site looking for an update. I am begging for an update especially since Blake Griffin is supposed to be a character. I have been running several scenerios through my head. I love Ari, her toughness, stubborness and vulnerability. I love her ex-roommates and their will to succeed. The guys are funny and Colin is a love.

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 09:12 pm
Title: Meetings

Great first chapter

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 07:36 am
Title: Meetings

Love Colin but Arianna works my last nerve, but now I know why she has personality disorder. Derrick and Maya are still the comic relief of the story.  The jury is still out on Ricardo I am not sure how I feel about their conservation both verbal and nonverbal.. Great update hopeful the next one won't take as long.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 02:57 am
Title: Meetings

if theres gonna be no sex scenes maybe you should change the ratings , i love this story by the way update soon :)

 Reviewer: angel94 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2013 04:47 am
Title: Meetings

8 out of 10 booboo good way to start off!! you got my attention!

 Reviewer: Anubian Rockstarr Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 07:46 am
Title: Meetings

Please update soon...

 Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2013 12:03 am
Title: Meetings

Loving this story! Good luck with finals and have fun with the fam, but hurry back soon, you have us spoiled!

 Reviewer: channessa Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2013 07:06 pm
Title: Meetings

Good start! But your lead character Arrianna (wouldn't use Nikki Minaj picture). I see her as the groupy-stalker type chick. (you must be a fan) Anyway,I can see Keke Palmer as Arrianna. I can see her not being phased by all of the hype. (JUST A THOUGHT). But either way this story has caught my attention!! I love stories  with this theme. I can stand to read 15 -25 more chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Hmm. I appreciate your input. I'm still trying to get a hang for the characters. Trying to get a feel for where exactly I want their personalities to go. So thank you! Awwwwe, well I'm glad you like it and I'll try to update tonight.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 23 2013 01:23 pm
Title: Meetings

nice beginning, I think the only thing that makes me a little bit uninterested is nikki minaj. but great writing!

 Reviewer: ncko Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 01:21 am
Title: Meetings

I like it. I am a huge football fan, and although Colin lost the superbowl this year to one of my favorite teams The Baltimore Ravens, he is a good young quarterback. Can't wait to see what happens.

Update Soon!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm actually pretty ignorant when it comes to football and all the logistics, so if ever I make a mistake with writing something sport related, feel free to correct me. Even google has its limitations. Yes! As bad or strange as it sounds, I actually rooted for the Ravens and had zero sympathy for the other team. Now, I like both teams and feel bad for the 49ers....and Colin. Haha. I'll shut up now. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 11:38 pm
Title: Meetings

:)



Author's Response:

:)) Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 07:51 pm
Title: Meetings

It seems strange that Colin would offer her as drink when he just witnessed her throwing one at his friend. And Arianna's 360 response is too sudden given how vehement she's been about not drinking alcohol. Other than that this is a nice start.



Author's Response:

I agree. I might rewrite it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 07:12 pm
Title: Meetings

I like your story.  The beginning is enough to hook me on it.  I didn't know the football players, so I had to look them up. LOL.  They're cute.  I am looking forward to seeing how you develop the characters.  And how their relationship goes.  If Ariana wakes up married, is it because alcohol just makes her forget OR is it because she had a roofie or something in her drink, without Colin's knowledge? 

Please update soon.

Nyeesha



Author's Response:

Thank you! Ya know, after re-reading it, I do agree that her sudden change of opinion regarding alcohol was a little strange. I might rewrite that certain part. Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 06:01 pm
Title: Meetings

I like Colin Caper back but Nicki Monaj makes my teeth itch. Love your additional though !



Author's Response:

Awe. Thank you. I won't lie, I am a Nicki fan, but to each his/her own. She also does irritate me with things she often does...

Thanks for reading and commenting! (:

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2013 03:50 pm


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