Constructive criticism- the plot is good, but the characters reactions (Arianna quickly agreeing to move in b/c she said it was her fault too that they got married) was not believable.

Your female's personality that you have created I get it, she's not really impresses with guys she presumes to be arrogant jerks, check - does not take mess from anyone, check, - but has an attitude of her own. It seems as though your character is looking to get mad (snippy with her friend for dragging her to a club [she could have left! that happened to me and I did leave], mad at a guy for buying her a drink at the club, called him a fool for his effort, and was mean to the Derrick character that complimented her beauty [though in a way she was joking, but she still came across hard]). Arianna sounds stuck up. She has to ease up on the caffeine... she's too uptight. The is for chapt. 5.

I guess not all main female characters may be naturally cool chicks and I'm not used to the main character being bitchy, b/c once again getting an attitude when a guy bought her a drink was silly. It made her seem like a bitch, in reality most women would have felt it a compliment and taken the drink; declined to accept it; or just ignored the drink altogether. If you repost those chapters those parts could be edited for a more realistic dialogue. 

Sorry about the critiques. But then they're only my opinion. 

At first I thought I wasn't going to like Jennifer but she's turning out alright. Keep up the good updates.

Loved the update!! More please.