He is still stuck on this crap. She didn't know who you were. LOl. So what!! Pudgy is going to get his ass handed to him. Trying to touch on her like that. How disgusting of him. Isn't his wife in the other room for goodness sake! I'm glad that they each have their own careers and goals.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2015 02:00 pm
Don't let anyone pressure you into doing anything you are not comfortable with,whether personal or professional. Always be true to yourself and God. The rest will work itself out!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2013 12:20 pm
Loved the update!Hope she watches out for creepy Kyle!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2013 06:30 pm
Hello- First off I want to say that you're a really good writer.
But I wanted to comment on the note you had about not having any sex scenes in the story. I understand you might not feel comfortable or maybe its because of your beliefs?? Which is all good. Seriously, that's great. However as a reader, when I click on a romance story that is intended for only for ones that are "17 years or older", I expect to have some intimate scenes.
Also I noticed one of the warnings you've designated for this storty is "sexual content". Sooo maybe you should consider editing that warnings off and maybe making this story a "Mature" rating which is less severe than a "17 or older". Just a thought.
I know I know by the end of the day it doesn't matter what we think, it's your story. But as a dedicated reader it was a let down to know that you enphatically not having any sex scenes.
Other than that, I really like your story.. it's fun, upbeat and very descriptive. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Humbly opinionated Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 11:52 pm
Derrick is fool! I am trying so hard to like Ariana but she makes it hard! She needs to give more but she afraid that she will fall in love with Colin. Yep I am not s fan of Ariana..
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 02:47 pm
nice update...More please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2013 08:46 am