Very entertaining! All the main characters have mega-personalities...LUV Derek- love him!  He cracks me up.  (Unless there's a specific reason, it would probably be best to have one spelling of his name. For some reason, his persononality seems to fit 'Derek' rathan than 'Derrick'.) 

Clever technique of gradually introducing the heavy intermittenly with the light-hearted banter

Colin and Arianna's chemistry is off the charts;  they gel nicely- certain aspects of their past circumstances have commonality...both similar and completely different challenges.  So far they've been honest and forthcoming with one another and I hope that continues throughout their journey.  One other thing to note is that the ladies seem to have a 'potty' mouth around their gentleman counterparts.  Before you trip, I have a trash-mouth too..., actually...I cuss like a sailor whenever appropriate to do so.  From their dialogue, all the hella fione gents have been respectful around the ladies (just an observation)

Can't tell you how many times of read NLME and loving forward to reading more...SOON!  :)

I really can't wait! Let the drama unfold for Arianna and Colin invovling everyone including his nasty brother, like eww (from previous chapters)! LOL, I so love the chemistry and this story so far keep up the good work, and please do update! Thanks so much!

Welcome back... Love the new chapter