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Title: Yes or No

Yes!!! They are getting somewhere. I'm glad that she at least told him that because she was starting to get on my nerves with the way she was acting. And did Colin eat the box!!!! Yesssssss Colin. Do that!!!!!!! Hehe

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 05:35 pm
Title: Yes or No

It's okay about the sex scenes.  Even some people who are not virgins are uncomfortable writing them.  I will say, that for someone who has inexperience with them you did an awesome job.  

It's great to see Arianna let her guard down, but she's never gonna get past her issues if she doesn't get treatment.

I'm loving how you're building this story.

 Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 03:23 am
Title: Yes or No

I think- yes, I think this is my fav chapter thus far from start to finish.  Loved the characters' dialogue, especially Arianna. Again the layers of her persona: her vulnerability, her strength, and the hard-core facade that protects her heart - and sanity - are being exposed with each conversation. I like that. I like envisioning and interpreting character development through their story- their song, as opposed to being told who they are. (Really good job there imo)

Colin's declaration to forego their five-month agreement and form a real relationship, a real life together- endeared him to me as a true prince. And the best part...

"Sorry," Colin replies in an unapologetic tone. "So was that a yes or no to the party?"

...after he had his cake, cake, cake, cake, cake, cake, cake!! roflmao

The sex scene was very nice; it wasn't over-the-top but it definitely made a statement. Threw Arianna for a loop didn't it? HA!

Great job!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 07:13 pm
Title: Yes or No

omg this iz a gudd story ive been reading the previous chapters nd maya nd derrick are really funny nd lmao kaydence iz a sex addict nd i think arianna should i guess open up more to collin nd i think she would look better as ashanti then nicki minaj. nd i NEED to to know about the girls past cause u said they all were in the foster home so i wonder wat happend?? nd i wanted to know if there iz gonna be anything between maya nd derrick ohh nd iz there gonna be a person (besides ricoardio) for kaydence she needs sumbody tht will set her straight or sumthing (just a suggestion) ok well im sorry i left u this long review but ya.....(GUESS WHO BIATCH!!)

XOXO



Author's Response:

Lmao. Tell me why I figured out it was you before I even got through the second sentence. You a crazy bitch, but I still love you boo boo. Haha. Yeah, I been thinking that maybe I should change aria to Ashanti, but you know Nicki is my girl. Lol. Oh, and tell your bro don't let me catch his ass in the street. I'm so don with him. Making me delete my shit. Smdh. Lol. I'm almost done with the next chapter but I'm having a hard time getting it right. :-/ So it should be out shortly.....hopefully by the end of this weekend. 

I MISSSSS YOUUHHHHH TRIICCKKK 

 

 Reviewer: diamondbaby101 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 09:03 pm
Title: Yes or No

I really enjoyed your 1st sex scene. Don't back down keep writing them they will get better.



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks! Yeah, I know you're right, but that was just too difficult for me to write. Maybe, in the near future, I'll try my hand at it. But, for now, I'll leave the erotic stuff to the pros on here. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

-Amby

 Reviewer: mrmalone Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 04:39 am
Title: Yes or No

Marianna got some serious issues maybe she could benefit from repeated slaps upside her head?  She is working my last half of nerve, take a chance little girl Colin is worth it! I this update two thumbs up!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 06:33 am
Title: Yes or No

Good "sex" scene.  I guess you are channeling Arianna  because she has her own issues with sex.  If you do write another scene put some of Ari's own aprehension and insecurity in this and hopefully Colin will be patient and can begin Ari's healing process.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, Arianna and I share some similiarities, but as far as the sex thing.....you'll just have to continue reading to find out if Aria's issues are simply her issues. Not mine.

-Amby

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2013 10:22 pm
Title: Yes or No

Great job on the sex scene! I'm glad arianna is opening up.

 Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2013 09:04 pm


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