Superb.
i am waiting f.or the loving and the drama!
Reviewer: luv_romance Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2013 06:48 am
bring on the drama,please!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 11:04 am
cute
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 05:56 am
Well written, cute and very funny. I am glad I decided to read this story I am really enjoying it. Thank you great job.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2013 02:47 am
This story is EXCELLENT! the love scenes are hot! I really like your style of writing and I absolutely love the characters and plot development. You're becoming one of my favourite writers- definitely one of the best on this site. Thanks for sharing your talent with us
Author's Response:
Speechless.
I.Have.No.Words.
Dude.
Child.
Person.
Angel!
You have NO idea how much your review means to me. This is, by far, the BEST reviews I have EVER received. No lie, I literally started tearing while reading it. It's one thing to like my story, but to consider me one of your favorite authors (on here)? Then to actually say I'm one of the best on this site? I must humbly disagree though, but the notion touches my heart. I don't even know you and I freaking love you. Honestly, I'm going to screencap this and keep it as a reminder of why I continue to write, despite my insecurities. I'll shut up now, but thank you a million, billion, trillion, times!!!!
Reviewer: Bel Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 09:49 pm
I like them but I would have used Ke ke Palmer in the lead female roll!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 05:44 am
I like the way they interact with eachother. Don't leave Derrick out he is funny! Who is at the door?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2013 05:41 am
Love the update! Can't wait for her to meet the parents.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2013 10:43 pm
omg i totally love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: UnKnownBeauty Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2013 07:52 pm
Loving this story! Good luck with finals and have fun with the fam, but hurry back soon, you have us spoiled!
Reviewer: channessa Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2013 07:06 pm
Derek. Mays and Kay are too damn funny!!! They are the comic relief of the story. Colinn is not going to let Ariana go after the five months has elapsed but she fight it as she is in denial! Good luck on your exams.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2013 03:09 pm
i have been looking for updates finally get one and you will be gone for a week please hurry back
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 24 2013 01:37 pm
funny!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2013 09:46 am
Good start! But your lead character Arrianna (wouldn't use Nikki Minaj picture). I see her as the groupy-stalker type chick. (you must be a fan) Anyway,I can see Keke Palmer as Arrianna. I can see her not being phased by all of the hype. (JUST A THOUGHT). But either way this story has caught my attention!! I love stories with this theme. I can stand to read 15 -25 more chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Hmm. I appreciate your input. I'm still trying to get a hang for the characters. Trying to get a feel for where exactly I want their personalities to go. So thank you! Awwwwe, well I'm glad you like it and I'll try to update tonight.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2013 01:23 pm
Funny chapter! I like kaydence fainting. Classic!
Reviewer: luv_romance Signed [Report This]Date: March 22 2013 07:50 pm
- To be honest I feel like your perception of Derrick Rose seems a bit off. When I see DRose I mostly see a man with his head in the right place and extremely humble for his situation. The way you're writing him makes him seem like Kobe Bryant or someone of the like; overconfident and just kind of sleazy and loud, he seems more tame than that, but that's just my perception and maybe yours is different. I am enjoying this story, I just feel like the characters don't match their real life counterparts which I believe is an integral part of a story based on real life characters.
- Did you hail from fictionpress and write a story about four girls and four boys. Who played hockey or something? I don't remember, but they were tutoring the boys...? I loved that story btw and I'm crushed you never finished it... If you even wrote it. Your name just seems very familiar. Lol.
- I can't wait for the next update, you are speedy for sure! :)
Author's Response:
1. I completely, whole-heatedly, 110% agree with you. I think Derek Rose is exactly how you described him: humble, kind, focused, etc. My version of Derek is a complete 360 in comparison to the actual person. I honestly didn't intend for his personality to come out the way it is. However, that's just the way it's been coming out. That being said, sometimes in life, unforeseen circumstances and tragic events can often cause people to mature. I think, as the story progresses, Derek will, eventually, have to grow up.
2. Good Lord. You are correct. I am from Fiction Press....and Fan Fiction (which I beg of you not to try to look me up). I've been on the wring scene since I was twelve. Haha. Yes, "Fall For You" is also another one of my stories. I think about returning and trying to finish that story, all the time. I'd probably want to start over completely though, revise and edit, ya know? Maybe.
3. Umm. You should know that I completely started fangirling when I saw your name. You're the same AwardedEmmy who wrote Make It Nasty, right? I started reading that when it only had....like 5 chapters. I suppose you've finished it by now? I must finish reading it when I get time.....Anyway, can I just say how extremely shocked I am that YOU, being the amazing author you are, like my story. Especially "Fall For You," which really isn't written all that well. I swear, when I saw your review this morning, it was all I could think about during school. Yes, it made me that happy.
Okay, I'll stop rambling. Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: AwardedEmmy Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 22 2013 09:27 am
Lovin this story
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 10:37 pm
Loved the update!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 06:11 pm
That suggady was funny as hell! Derek is a fool!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 01:53 pm
I thought it kinda sexy. r u serious about no sex scenes? coz they r now married.#justsaying
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 01:01 pm
great story keep it coming so sad about the love scenes just make it fun and interesting
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 07:42 am
liking so far keep it coming
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 07:30 am
LMAO!!!! I love it please posst soon :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2013 06:26 am
At first I thought I wasn't going to like Jennifer but she's turning out alright. Keep up the good updates.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2013 08:05 am