Loved this chapter... I'm going through something with my BFF also, she just up and left the state without saying a hi or bye or evens screw you
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 12:55 am
I am totally enjoying this story. So sorry to hear about your friendship. Letting go of a lifelong friendship is never easy no matter the cause, so I'll be praying for your peace and continuous encouragement during this time.
Reviewer: Kurious Kale Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 08 2015 07:57 pm
Just caught up and I love this story, can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Kristi Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 08 2015 04:53 am
Thank you for the update. I like this story.
Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 12:19 pm
Girllll, I missed you & this story so much. & sorry about your friendship, what's ment to be , will be c6;a039;
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 04:37 am
Constructive criticism- the plot is good, but the characters reactions (Arianna quickly agreeing to move in b/c she said it was her fault too that they got married) was not believable.
Your female's personality that you have created I get it, she's not really impresses with guys she presumes to be arrogant jerks, check - does not take mess from anyone, check, - but has an attitude of her own. It seems as though your character is looking to get mad (snippy with her friend for dragging her to a club [she could have left! that happened to me and I did leave], mad at a guy for buying her a drink at the club, called him a fool for his effort, and was mean to the Derrick character that complimented her beauty [though in a way she was joking, but she still came across hard]). Arianna sounds stuck up. She has to ease up on the caffeine... she's too uptight. The is for chapt. 5.
I guess not all main female characters may be naturally cool chicks and I'm not used to the main character being bitchy, b/c once again getting an attitude when a guy bought her a drink was silly. It made her seem like a bitch, in reality most women would have felt it a compliment and taken the drink; declined to accept it; or just ignored the drink altogether. If you repost those chapters those parts could be edited for a more realistic dialogue.
Sorry about the critiques. But then they're only my opinion.
Reviewer: Swirly_girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 22 2014 08:47 am
When are you going to update this story?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 09:39 pm
I am truly missing this story. What are the chances of a update
Author's Response:
Very soon ;)
-Amby
Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 04 2014 05:05 am
Missing this story, any chance of an update soon?
Author's Response:
Yes, a very good chance. ;)
-Amby
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2014 04:56 am
ok...it's been a minute since the last update Miss DQA...what's up with that?
Author's Response:
*hides behind pole*
I know. I know. I shall explain everything in the authors note of the next update....which should be up by the end of this upcoming week!
-Amby
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2013 04:44 am
I'm so happy I found this story, it's awesome! I should be in bed right now but I could not stop reading the story. Even though I'll be exhausted at school tomorrow it will be worth it. I love the development of the characters and relationship between Aria and Colin is refreshing as is the plot. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, I really hope you continue to write it. Also, I love picturing Nicki as Aria, great choice, she and Colin would make a gorgeous couple.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Finally! Somone who shares my vision of Nicki and Colin. I love her and I think she and Colin would defineitely make an amazing couple! Yes, you can expect an update within the next week! ;)
-Amby
Reviewer: I HeartMy Ships Signed [Report This]Date: September 25 2013 07:02 am
I love this story and I have to admit that I have been stalking this site looking for an update. I am begging for an update especially since Blake Griffin is supposed to be a character. I have been running several scenerios through my head. I love Ari, her toughness, stubborness and vulnerability. I love her ex-roommates and their will to succeed. The guys are funny and Colin is a love.
Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 24 2013 09:12 pm
Awe, they're so cute together!
I so thought the 'chase' scene would end up being a 'bedroom' moment but was pleasantly surprised that it didn't. Colin is a gentleman and really does care for his wife- as strange as that may sound but it's true. Knowing her history- in part, he's willing to wait until she's ready and for that, dude has earned more cool-points from this fan of NLMG!
One thing i must be picky on is the scene where Aria takes note of his closet...missed me on that one b/c it's not like she hasn't been in his room before and is just noticing for the first time how massive and meticulously kept wardrobe is...? They've been 'shacked up' for a minute now, right?
Other than that, the meet-the-females-of-his-fam lunch was cool. Although that Lindsay chick is too much of a Colin fanatic/worshipper type thang happening imo. She'll be put on notice just like that skeezer was promptly schooled and dismissed at the pool party. Mrs Kaepernick don't play dat! hahaha
nice update
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 01:36 am
I think- yes, I think this is my fav chapter thus far from start to finish. Loved the characters' dialogue, especially Arianna. Again the layers of her persona: her vulnerability, her strength, and the hard-core facade that protects her heart - and sanity - are being exposed with each conversation. I like that. I like envisioning and interpreting character development through their story- their song, as opposed to being told who they are. (Really good job there imo)
Colin's declaration to forego their five-month agreement and form a real relationship, a real life together- endeared him to me as a true prince. And the best part...
"Sorry," Colin replies in an unapologetic tone. "So was that a yes or no to the party?"
...after he had his cake, cake, cake, cake, cake, cake, cake!! roflmao
The sex scene was very nice; it wasn't over-the-top but it definitely made a statement. Threw Arianna for a loop didn't it? HA!
Great job!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2013 07:13 pm
I was confused for a sec then I realised it was a flashback
Author's Response:
Ya that's y we put the start flashback in big words so ppl would know it wasn't present time ~Mya (co-author) :)
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2013 10:45 am
So why did after saying something you wrote "a beat" what doesnt mean?
Author's Response:
Ugh. I've always dreaded this moment. I always knew someone would ask, but I had hoped it would be when I finally had a plausible answer. I still don't. The best way I can expain it, is that it doesn't mean anything. It's somewhat, in my strange writing methods, a way for me to say "pause." Sorry, like I said, I don't really know how to explain it.
-Amby
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2013 03:10 am
Oh shit , sexy Blake + sexy Colin = sexy problems
Author's Response:
Haha. Oh yeah, Blake and Colin.....this will be an interesting one, for sure.
-Amby
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 08:52 pm
Is it ok that I'm a little confused right now? I was behind so I was reading to catch up but how did we go from a pool party to a date? It might be my fault because I rarely read authors' notes.....
Author's Response:
Lol. It's okay.
A hint of advice though, with my stories, you should at least try to skim the authors notes. They usually have relevant and integral information. The date, the entire chapter actually, is a flashback between Aria and her ex. It's not in the present time. Next chapter will resume the present. Hope that helped!
-Amby
Reviewer: RazorbackCutie17 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 05:32 pm
lol I luv it married to a baller footballer! Yessir this is the life!!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 08:11 am
Luv the character selection I also like when my mouse pointer moves on the pictures the name of the characters show up pretty cool!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 08:04 am
oh uh I wonder who that lady is?lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 08:03 am
I luv this story finally a good girl that does give her cookies away! great chapter I luv it!!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 07:54 am
She's really young. People take back abusers when the old and should knw better. She musts needs to grow up a little.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 04:55 am
I'm TOO thru w/ Aria right now! Ugh!!
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 04:09 am