thanks for the awesome update!! let the games begin!! if caleb is getting sprung after a taste hes gonna be pitiful after they have sex! more please!!
Author's Response:
Caleb has bitten off more than he can chew....LOL thanks for the review!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 05:19 am
Alrite Merri Got Her Groove Back LOL......
Author's Response:
Oh yeah! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 04:23 am
All righty! I've finished reading and I still say frickin' AWESOME! I love the age dynamic. I love Armie Hammer.
For some reason, a lot of children have extraordinary trouble seeing their parents as sexual beings. As evidenced by one sadly misguided review below referencing the rape of children (at age 35. What!?), its seems difficult for them change their view of a parent.I am sooooooo waiting for Merri to stomp that train of thought into the ground with her children once her confidence comes up to snuff about her life changes.
Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 02:58 am
I'm not sure I like her children ver much...lol! I get that the only they will ever truly see their mother with is their father. Perfectly natural. However, they don't have to be so rude about it. They think its ridiculous that she would want to get out, but then her daughter says she needs to get out more.
Actually, they don't seem very interested in her life as long she isn't living it as a woman. I honestly think they would be happy if she became the old cat lady. Her out having fun and dating, in any serious way, probably never crossed their minds. And again, I get it, she's their mom, not a "real" woman, but come on!
Author's Response:
Children are like that. However Merri isn't dead and they should recognize that. She has her own life to live and they are going to find that out. LOL
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 02:33 am
Brenda you really have a gift.. Each of your stories are unique but equally brilliant..
Author's Response:
Thanks! More is coming!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 02:07 am
Great start so far...looking forward to continuing.
Author's Response:
Working on the final chapter as we speak....
Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2013 01:41 am
Aww... what a good start
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 01:02 am
Eww. She's old and is basically raping children. :(
Author's Response:
Did I miss something? Is she the aggressor? A 35 year old man is far from a child and if you feel that 50 is old, then its best if you stop reading this story.
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 12:36 am
I loved this chapter! Merri's hesitancy is quite endearing and relatable. I love that Caleb was attentive and didn't judge- he seems willing to go all the way with her even though he's trying to tell himself that this is strictly business. That's malarky...Caleb wants Merri something wicked and judging by how much he loved his snack, lol.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes, it's hard to remember its business when you're having so much fun. LOL
Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 12:12 am
I like Caleb. I was wondering why he was an escort. To bad that he lost his wife and got a lot of debt. I wonder if he will be objective and not become attached to Merrie.
I was stunned that Merrie agreed to the oral sex. It was fun to read her reaction.
Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response:
Merri is trying to loosen up. thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2013 12:08 am
Oh. (said in low reverential tones) I love this. Thank you for writing this. I haven't even finished reading yet.
Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 11:46 pm
Great update . I'm loving Merri and her new found freedom . I like that Caleb is taking his time with her too . More please .
Author's Response:
Yes, her children are grown and now she can live her own life. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 11:25 pm
Merri was more than willimn to move to the next level after he feasted on her. You're grown no need to share your private life with your kids, who have already decided you do not need a love life.
Author's Response:
Yes the kids feel that she should be sitting in the corner somewhere knitting...lol
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 11:15 pm
Awesome update.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 10:22 pm
Loving it.....Great response to the challenge.Caleb's right age should'nt stop you from being with and loving someone:)
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 10:21 pm
Something different
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 10:21 am
Loving it, Brenda!
Kids can be so self-absorbed (I know mine is...she's almost 15 and truly believes the world revolves around her...lol), they often fail to see or acknowledge their parents needs. Love it that Merri is taking matters into her own hands and making things happen!
Can't wait for the actual event; should be epic! Loving Caleb...he sounds like just what she needs to get rid of the cobwebs...lol...
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 08:11 am
love it brenda!!! i cant wait to hear calebs thoughts on merry. more please!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 06:04 am
I like this story so far. Very interesting.
Reviewer: Margo Betts Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 05:16 am
I like this one already...Caleb's right...age ain't nothing but a number...can't wait to read how he woos Merri and rocks her world...go get 'im, Merri...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 02:10 am
HMMMMMM....I REALLY love this beginning. I like the way that Caleb approaches Merri. And he is right. Age ain't nothing but a number.
Can't wait to see much more.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2013 01:52 am
Thanks Brenda1257, I am looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 11:45 pm
Awesome start! Cant wait to read more
Reviewer: Eboniwm Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 09:30 pm
You've done it again..Brenda. Can't wait for this poor woman to get those cobwebs swept out..
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 04:19 pm
Loving the new story. Merry kids are selfish. I'm glad Merry has decided to get life. She and Caleb are going to set that bed on fire.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: April 06 2013 12:36 pm