I can't wait to read what's next for these two. 💖 this story!!!

OMG! SCREAMS. I love this story please continue pretty please!!!

Idk how long I've been waiting for this update and it was well worth the wait too omg I'm still I'm shocked at Henry's confession about being in love with Val but it pissed me off that he's so mad at her for showing up with another man when he clearly ignored her for months Wtf Henry ! Nonetheless I freaking love the update I'm so anxious and greedy for me !

I think a chapter from Henry's point of view at this point in the story would be inconsistent.  So far, you've done well revealing his past through conversations and the like.  Perhaps it would be difficult to do so again, but stylistically it would be preferable to changing the point of view this late in the game. 

Showing the reader what you want to reveal about Henry through another character's experience makes a more interesting read for the reader.  You have to come up with a plausible and dynamic situation in which Henry could reveal his past.  That makes for exiting, must-read scenes. 

love this story.. its great

Val just get mr mad sometimes, her mom is a bitch n her father.. yyeah.. 

I maybe  the only reader who loves Henry still.   I am paying attention to the bits and peices you exposed about his past and that makes me love him.  When you revealed his fiance cheated on him with his best friend, I knew he had trust issues. When he talked about how his father just left them and he had to step up and try to take care of his mother and siblings,that scarred him.   Being homeless and now finding out he was beaten within an inch of his life.  I'm sorry but I'm pro Henry.  

The thing that  makes me check the website for this story almost everyday is the contrast between Henry and Valarie.  Everyone  wants to be with Henry. His personality just draws you to him. On the other hand, Val is a bit withdrawn because of her past weight problem and not being accepted, but somehow when the two of them are together the relationship works.  You can see he  cared about her and it was refreshing to hear him say it. I was so glad that Val went after him.  It so strange to me when people have feelings for someone and mss out on the one thing that the majority of the population wants ....to be truly loved, because they are too afraid to express their true feelings.

I hope they talk and really put their feelings out there. He has already exposed himself.  It took Chase's antagoniizing behind to push Henry over the edge.  Even when he was out of control, I was a hundred percent on his side.  How  do get to be so arrogant that you can just call someone stupid and think it's okay.  Henry already wanted to kick his behind for being with Valarie. I was glad he let Chase know  he was  seconds away from an ass whipping.

I could  go on and on about the things that I love about  this story and your writing, but I don't want you to spend a lot of time reading  reviews, while  we  are impatiently waiting for the next  update.  Good thing you re not a dealer because you got me hooked.

CHAPTER 19

THIS WAS THE MOST EMOTIONAL CHAPTER I'VE EVER READ! I LITERALLY CRIED FOR A GOOD 5 MINUTES LMAO 

You cannot imagine the amount of happiness that is coursing through my brain, when i just randomly checked to see if you updated, and you did! I was like OMFGG! you NEVER disappoint your audience and im so sure everyone must be cheering for joy. this chapter topped it off. I was crying for joy when val just ... left him standing there. why? because that's what he deserves. And when he saw her with chase? it made me even more happier. I remember that chapter when he told her he isnt really the jealous type ... BUT HE SURE AS HELL IS ! ahahah he is seriously the possessive jealous type and i LOVE IT . when he started getting angry and telling chase to take his hands off what's his... i died. if that was me, i probably would've fainted... and then jumped his bones hahaha She is so strong to actually remain standing there while he got all angry and was practically telling the world that she was his. It broke my heart reading about her issues when he left and never responded. So yes, he deserved to feel jealous and im so glad she didnt go back to him. 

When he started getting real emotional and screamed that he loved her... that was honestly the best part. he was so raw...so emotional. it was like nothing could stop him from revealing his true emotions for her. 

I hope she doesnt take him back straight away?? i honestly hope she tells him that he's hurt her way too much and then he finds out more about george and just loses it. That part where she wouldnt let him touch her... i was like GIRL POWER! she was so right. i probably would've punched his beautiful face. 

And then that last part. When elle took her away to comfort her. I cried. Just seeing her so broken. And then overhearing henry's convo... it was like WOW this dude ... 

but seriously now that she's walked after him i hope she just makes him settle down and then tells him she doesnt forgive him or anything. he'll go crazy for a while trying to get in contact with her! like i just think she deserves that.

I LOVEEDDDD THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH AND I LOVEEEEE THIS BOOK EVEN MORE. THIS IS HONESTLY MY FAVOURITE. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I WISH YOU WOULD PUBLISH SO I CAN BECOME YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN AND BUY ALL YOUR BOOKS! LOVED IT SOOOOOO MUCH ! 

I have a question, The prologue chapter, did that already happened? I don't remember reading anything close to it in their previous "love making" scene's.

This is another WOW chapter.  I was so proud for her being strong and having a clear resolve about her future but that went away once Henry dropped the L word.

Poor Henry, living a facade and not opening up fully to anyone.

I don't know how Valerie can fix him while trying to right herself. 

Congratulations on finally being FEATURED!!

Well I don't think a POV from Henry would hurt at all I've seen it done in other stories actually it helps so you know what he's thinking

Real good... Michael Jackson =]

I've really missed this story, but this massive update was well worth the wait. Can't wait to see what happens next.

symph.night

Man...I guess I'm like those stereotypical girls in those romantic movies because I would of jumped in Henry's arms when he said he was in love with me lmao, sorry....not sorry. Val is truly traumatized by her last relationship because her being scared of Henry was kinda weird. I would understand if she feared for Chase, who btw is a dick, but being scared of Henry was actually sad. I don't want her to fear him ever because I really do like them together. If I was Valerie  though I would of gave him the business. How he gonna roll up months later talking about "she is his" and no one should touch her. I would of asked him if he was out of his ever loving mind and cussed his ass out. But of course when he professed his love I would of got down and dirty with him that same night. Hopefully he can convince val to be with him again so she will do the same thing lol. Now I'm really excited for the next chapter, please update soon.