I want so bad fr er to she'd some of her insecurity. Is it mostly based on her fathers coldness? I know the ex did a number on her. I need the details.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed
[Report This]Date: July 18 2013 06:13 am
Ok... Ok so I'll admit it. Soooo I don't where in the hell I've been, that I didn't see this story until now. Annnd here's my confession:
I started your story yesterday and could NOT put it down until the wee hours of this morning. Lol And now I'm walking around like a zombie because of the lack of sleep. hahaha It's just that good. I LOVE your dialogue, the light banter between the characters is very real and funny. The inner dialogue is at times unsettling but very real, interesting and funny.
Your characters are sooo believable and not cookie cutter and just so interesting to me. Your descriptions are very smooth and deep. Valerie's issues and insecurities opens up the fear and problem that a lot of us have to deal with... those little voices of insecurity that crawl into and then nest in our brain.
I can't stop saying awesome things about this story. I just hope to see an update soon because I'm biting my fingernails and I'm afraid I've developed a bit of an addiction to it. Lol dramatic much?! Well maybe some of Val..erie has rubbed off on me. Oh lord, did that just rhyme? :/
-p2p-
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:-D
Reviewer: partial2passion Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 09:33 pm
How could I have missed ths little gem. Ahh I hope her self esteem grows.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 05:14 am
That cab ride was everything!! So HOT!
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2013 04:17 am
I'm so happy for Val and Henry.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 03:02 pm
SOOOO hot!!!
Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 08:52 am
Savannah's a bitch and Henry's hot. Great story!
Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 05:31 am
I hope they got dropped off at a hotel...
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lol!!!!
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 05:02 am
Hot cab ride.... speechless.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 04:20 am
I hope Savannah stops before she has an addiction. Henry is so honest and that's good. Valerie brings out the best in him. I think he really cares about her if he didn't he wouldn't of stopped her advances and explained himself. They have amazing chemistry I can't wait to see when their restraints break.
Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 03:21 am
Awesome chapter. I'd grown a little worried, with all her self-doubt and negativity as that is a lot to put on another person, but it seems that she's starting to not be so dour.
Reviewer: LiquidFyre Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 03:13 am
I knew that she shouldn't have trusted Savannah and I am wondering wow Val even entertained Savanna? Henry is feeling Val but I think that it scares him. What did Savannah have planned for Valarie? I think that something bad should happen to Savannah. Loving it!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 02:50 am
Jaysus wept! Henry is soooooooo fucking SEXAY! I want one!
Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 01:03 am
Great Chapter! Wonder if Valerie is really ready for Henry!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 12:20 am
Loved this chapter!!! The walls are coming down Val. It was triple HOTT in that cab! Update soon please!
Reviewer: Love33 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 15 2013 11:44 pm
Good story. Henry better not be an assassin to her. I think he likes her though...she's different in a good way. I didn't really think he was gonna be such a ho, but maybe he's ready for a change. We'll see...I don't want her to get hurt anymore. Her self confidence is already so low, he needs to fall for her.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2013 05:29 am
Great story! Hope you update soon....
Reviewer: Toya23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2013 05:25 am
I think Savannah is using her experience with Henry to shape him. I'm glad he's at least honest so if he says he's not ready for a relationship thats what he means. I think he genuinely likes Valerie and if he continues to treat her like he is she's going to fall hard I just hope he's there to catch her. As cliche and corny as that sounds lol it would destroy her if he breaks her heart. I can't wait to see what happens when he gets back to valerie. s/n his brother sounds just as cute!
Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 03:43 pm
Valarie still annoys me and she was doing so well. Why in the hell is she listening to Savannah? That ho wants Henry back and I find her kindness to Val to be suspect. Why hasn't Henry started looking for Val? He knows how Val is and that she shouldn't be left alone to think her negative thoughts or the thoughts of others. Henry needs to ride to rescue! Please have Val find a job soon as she needs to be away from her sperm donor as soon as possible. Fabulous!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 03:02 pm
This is not going to end well she is going to embarrass herself please make her stop drinking. I like her but in almost every chapter she comes off pitiful. I really hope Henry isn't a playrr...even if it is a nice player.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 03:00 pm
Great update!
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 02:49 pm
I am so hooked to this story.I really hope Henry is somewhat serious about Val...don't want to see Val getting hurt.The are great together.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2013 09:16 am
I like those two together...Henry completes her as she completes him...
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2013 04:07 pm