That was a good chapter. Her friends are a hoot! Glad she is going to give it a try with Henry! Loved when he said I am going to make you mine real soon! So hot ;)
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 14 2013 12:14 am
i like henry. like him a lot!!!
Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2013 09:08 am
YAY! Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 13 2013 05:33 am
Kudos to Vak for taking a chance and going to the party. I want her to realize that she can't stay walled up forever; she needs to let her guard down a little. I think Henry is the right man for the job. I adore him and don't think her trust would be misplaced.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 13 2013 04:23 am
I knew that Ella was lying about Henry going back to England for the first time I was glad that Val was stupid. Why does her father treat her like that? The pieces of the puzzle are starting to fall into place. Val needs to let all of those demons go. Maybe it would be best for to quit working for her father, as he doesn't feel that she deserve her job. Man, what an asswhole!!! Love Henry, Savannah is cray cray!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2013 04:18 am
What happened..did her ex use her for sex and then tell her no one wants her...crazy how people try hurt you and you actually fall for it...we have to be stronger than that....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2013 03:15 am
Thanks for a good read. Hopefully she will be able to develop some self esteem.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2013 02:56 am
I'm pretty sure that Valerie is hands down, THE MOST annoying character I've ever read about, next to Bella Swan. She might be worst that Bella.
Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2013 09:09 am
Valerie's reaction to her insecurities are really making her unlikeable. The worst part, is she knows this. I hope she loosens up because I want to keep reading because I like Henry and Ella very much.
Reviewer: peachmartini Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2013 05:28 am
So I am curently sitting in the USF library reading this summer so I defintly lmbo when i read USF graudtaion ... ARE U A BULL???
Author's Response:
this is so crazy lol. at first i thought you left a review to the wrong story. i completely made up the name of a college with San Francisco in mind. i didn't even think about the actual USF college. No I'm not a bull, sorry lol.
Reviewer: auzirus1 Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2013 04:48 am
Great story so far! I hope Valerie gets some confidence sounds like Henry will be just the guy for her. Look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 11:32 pm
Somebody has really scarred Val emotionally.She should take chance with Henry and I hope he helps Val to make her see herself in a new light becuz she really needs some confidence boost.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 07:55 pm
This is a really awesome love story! I've enjoyed reading it and I'm looking forward to the next post :-)
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 04:38 pm
Val...or Valerie is really irking the hell out me. If she wants to b alone great, but don't drive everyone down with her. I'm glad I dnt have friends like her. Sheesh! let her a** b lonely and living in a miserable world of regret until she learns on her own to do better. (woo saaa) ok my rant is over. Great update; keep em comin.
Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 04:35 pm
Val is so stupid and needs to seek out a new psychiatrist as her current one is just taking her money. I am so irritated with Val right now I could choke her! I do understand how powerful that negative inner dialogue could be and it's hard to drown out. I hope that she can get past her demons! Good stuff!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 04:15 pm
This story is literaly based off of my life. I'm like this in every way. It's actually creepy... I feel like I'm reading my own thoughts.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:39 pm
You get an A+++ for Spandau Ballet. I can sympathise with Val because I've been there hell, still therr sometimes. I think Henry will be good for her but ultimately she's goret to learn her own worth regardless of how ainyone se feels about her. Then she'll know that she totally deserves a "Henry".
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:36 pm
Val needs someone like Henry. That is why they "clicked". Somebody really must have hurt her. Was it her boyfriend, did he use her?
Looking forward to the next update.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: June 03 2013 02:11 pm
Aw, cute couple in the making. I hate the way Peter treats Valerie. I wonder why its so hard for her to look in the mirror..."nervous breakdown?" There's more to that...I need to know what happened to her in the past...to make her so self-pitying with such low self-esteem.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: June 02 2013 07:59 pm
Hmmmm...this looks interesting.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: May 31 2013 02:30 am
Oh yeah, I really don't like Peter. What was Val's childhood like for he'd self-esteem to be so low? I can understand every bif of she feels. I am reserving my opinion on Henry as he's friends with Peter whom I can't stand. Good stuff!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 02:19 pm
Loving this story........It's going to be really challenging for Henry to break the walls Val has around herself.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 10:42 am
Ha, ha I like. More please....
Reviewer: Lindy Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 09:44 am
I also have that same feeling, even after reading this beginning for a 2nd time, Peter and Henry are working together to get her out Peter's way.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: May 20 2013 05:58 pm