Oh how I love the darker side of the Chamber. I think this is one of those stories where it's best to leave the ending unanswered. Fuck, that was good. I hope you continue to write dark fiction.
Oh my gosh, I am seriously cheezing right now!
Thanks so much for your comments, I am glad that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)
Date: May 26 2013 11:05 am
He was just plain nasty and an asshole!
You are so right. And dare I add, cheap! I really wanted to wring his neck...
Thanks for reading!
Date: May 26 2013 03:42 am
My goodness she had an out of body exoerience and killed her cheating husband. What a bastard he was. Does she get away with his murderer? Thanks
Thanks for the review. Yeah, I would say that was an out of body experience... it wasn't supposed to end like that! He should have signed those papers... But I really don't know if she gets away. A part of me wants her to, she could claim self defense but then there is excitement to be had if she's running from the law. I will think about it.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 02:41 pm
OMG, that was intense! I felt her pain, poor thing. How the heck can she escape this?! Waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Thanks for you review.
I feel kinda bad saying this, but I don't know if this is going to be longer :(
I may revisit this one along with my other short stories, but for right now this is it.
Date: May 19 2013 08:48 pm
Not saying she should have killed him. But I understand. Once she heard the word "Years" and he was going away with "her". I would have snapped too.
Thanks. I honestly don't know how I'd react... I mean, rape alone makes me want to get a bat and fly someone's head. And at the same time, she loves this guy, he was supposed to be her protector and he just slowly turned into a rotten dude...
I just don't know. I'm gonna stop talking now lol
Thanks again for the input!
Date: May 19 2013 08:34 pm