Reviews For In Circles We Go
Title: Here Comes The Tide.

Yes! Yes! Yes! My heart literally thumped when I saw the update!!! I missed your story sooooo much! But its quality quenched my thirst..


But I must confess that I'm really torn now. I reasonably thought that Sierra needed to collect herself by herself to overcome her drug addiction. That's logical since Jake is so important in her life that a mere word or facial expression from him(I know, I'm exaggerating...but hey, it's on point!) which upset her, could have the "power" to make her relapse. Or at least be the triggering factor. But now, seeing that she just wanted to end her life to make it better for her family/firends....I can't help but think that she on the contrary needs his support....


Even if Jake is indeed cheating on Monica with Sierra, this last scene was so sweet, he loves her so much. I think he doesn't even realize the depth of his love for her. Since he always shrugs off Finch/Monica's accusations and get all definsive. Now, he owe her excuses. I'm eager to see her reaction..I mean, if he ever plan to tell her...


I can't wait to see Maksim in action. I don't know how to picture him but think of Christian Bale (in Out of the Furnace or Batman). Wiil you post a photo of him! I have yet to know his connection with Sierra's family....But, Viktor is in deep sh..t now! eh..eh..eh..I hope he'll make justice for Neema. Her being in hospital is heartbreaking, Sierra must stay at her side and not to something stupid.


Thanx so much for sharing, I can't wait to read what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I swear I'm smiling so hard reading your review. Sometimes reviews reveal things that the author doesn't even see. Don't worry, Maksim's connection with Sierra's fam will be revealed soon. 

As far as who I see as Maksim, I was kinda leaning toward Nikolaj Coster-Waldau, but you can choose whatever face you want as the character. 

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 06:47 pm

Title: Here Comes The Tide.

I almost didn't believe it when I saw the update! That was a fast paced chapter I feel like everything hit boom: Monica confrontation; boom: Aut Neema; boom: almost attempted suicide then finally the Jake/Sierra reunion which I didn't see as a completely positive thing because they aren't confronting the real issues. Both are indulging in physical comfort which I wouldn't have a problem with expect for the fact that Jake is still with Monica. I knew where she was coming from when she went after Sierra but it doesn't excuse the fact that she did it. I just want That butthole to go down! Vic needs to get a switch from a tree and take his whooping like a man. 



Author's Response:

Lol! I couldn't agree more! My fingers are itching to get to Viktor. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 07:00 am

Title: Here Comes The Tide.

I've been waiting so long for you to updat and you finally did. This was a great chapter, and I hope you update soon.

Author's Response:

I will. Next chapter coming soon!

Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 04:00 pm

Title: Here Comes The Tide.

Jake, why did you let her in? SIERRA IS USER WHO DOESN'T LOVE YOU,  let that trick go. Let Monica go she will never trust you so let her go and find a mqn that she can. Jake you sex with Sierra and you know that you can't trust her, you had unprotected sex with a known drug addict. Not smart! Sierra is drug ho and drug ho's will do anthing to get drugs.



Author's Response:

pmgayles I love your reviews I swear, lol!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 02:55 pm

Title: Here Comes The Tide.

I can't say thank you enough. I have missed thiss story and you didn't dissapoint.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 01:44 pm

Title: Here Comes The Tide.

Glad to have you back. I missed this story sooooo much.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 10:29 am

Title: Fireworks. Part III

Please update.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 24 2014 11:59 am

Title: Fireworks. Part III

This was the sugady!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:27 am

Title: Fireworks. Part III

This was the sugady!!

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Date: February 22 2014 10:45 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part III

This was the sugady!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 10:43 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part III

Oh no!! I wonder what Viktor will do to Neema, he's always up to no good!! Though, I wonder about Maksim's past, what does it have to do with Sierra's parents and Neema?! Monica is in big big trouble, she should have learned not to appraoch Sierra. Jake's reaction is so sweet...I just love Finch's advise for a threesome!! He's so into Monica, nobody noticed it. It's been a while, I hope everything's fine. Thanx for sharing this extra good story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it Peanut! Everything is fine and the next chapter is coming soon! Maksim's past will be touched on soon enough.

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2014 06:36 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part III

I don't know why, but this story is inspiring to me. It is also beautifully written! I can't wait for the next installment. ツ

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I'm happy you're inspired by this story, that means alot.

Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 03:08 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part III

This is my favorite chapter! Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 09:56 am

Title: Fireworks. Part II

So proud of Sierra's progress. Glad she's finding her way as best she can and not depending on Jake as her lifeline, at least not as a crutch. Sierra's accomplishment is due to whatever inner strength she's holding on to. She's no longer making excuses. In fact, she's accepted her flaws/faults/f*ckups and moving forward. 'When a woman's fed up, ain't nothing you can do about it' -so goes the saying and it definitely describes Sierra imo. She's been through hell and back and then some and it's time for her to live- cut those chains and shackles imposed upon her by circumstances and evil and speaking of evil...

Viktor.

I really, really wish Viktor gets his comeuppance soon!  Maksim is the perfect person to serve it to him too!  FLOVE Maksim- dude is lethal! He's is own man which is one of the things i love about his character.  I FHATE Viktor! He's an opportunistic, manipulative punk!!!

Speaking of opportunistic...

Monica.

Don't like her. Why do I feel like she could have underminded Sierra somehow? Aided the devil [Viktor] in some way so that she could have the man she coveted for years- Sierra's man. idk, maybe she's a nice girl who only want the best for Jake but for some reason, I don't think so.

Anyhoo...

please keep Sierra on the right path. I'm rooting for her!  Thanks for the great update.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 04:23 am

Title: Fireworks. Part III

Nice twist with Neema & Maxsim; I did not see that coming but I'm excited about it. 2 great updates w/in days, thank you!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 01:16 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part I

Just had an image of Monica walking up to Sierra in the bathroom singing "The Boy is Mine" with Sierra doing Brandy's part. As for everyone hating on Monica, get over yourselves. Who wouldn't feel threatened by the ex-girlfriend, especially knowing the history between the two. Look, I'm not hating on Sierra or Jake but their relationship just wasn't healthy. Jake's an enabler and a frequent passenger on the guilt-trip and Sierra needs more than a few months in rehab to sort her shit out, and I'm not talking about the drug use either. And Deena didn't help with her little stunt. Shit like that can trigger a relapse and I really don't want Sierra to fall back into her old patterns of self destruction. Jake needs some help cos it looks like he's gonna end up hurting Monica unintentionally as well.

Reviewer: Ikkina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 11:54 am

Title: Fireworks. Part III

Good story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 07:34 am

Title: Them.

ok I'm HOOKED!!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: justmeplz Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 05:50 am

Title: Fireworks. Part II

I literally thought my mind was playing tricks on me but, you're back!! As is Maksim....and the drama. Which I live for. Lol.

Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 06:44 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part II

I am not feeling Finch!!!  Sierra needs to figure out why she acts behaves and does the things that she does.  Why does she like she is not good enough for Jake?    I am trying my best to at least tolerate Sierra but I don't deal well with stupid. more please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 05:47 am

Title: Fireworks. Part II

Oh, I'm so glad to read this story again. Thanks for updating. And what a chpater! I am so proud of Sierra. I really, really hope she can keep her way back from the hole she fell into a mere year ago. She's doing so good. I really root for her to get better. I don't even want any getting back with Jake. Sh eneeds to be her own person. She need time to grow and strengthen by herself, with friends and family supporting her. And I like that she is not hanging on the hope to get back with Jake anymore. She seemns ready to move on and do things for her own sake. So happy.

Also, Maksim better be back to give some serious as whopping to his unsufferable brother. that Vikto, that little piece of shit. I hope he get karma bitched real good!

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 29 2013 01:29 am

Title: Fireworks. Part II

I just read this wonderful story and read some of the reviews.  We all have opinions, but why is everyone down on Monica?  Sierra is at fault for what happen, if she truly loved Jake she would had told him what Victor had said.  Monica is insecure and maybe she should have waited, but she cares about Jake.  That is my two cents.  KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND THANKS FOR.WRITING FOR ALL OF THIS SITE FANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2013 10:50 pm

Title: Them.

I'm in agreement with Daddyprincess review. I think it would be good for Sierra to find someone new who won't throw her past in her face each time their is a disagreement or who she feels she has to constantly tiptoe around or kowtow to.  I like Maksim with her because I don't think he will ridicule her because of his past and will help her become a stronger person.  Who needs to be around people who don't want her to improve and will constantly remind her of her mistakes, just look at Finch's thoughts.  If they are thinking it, then their actions will begin to show that each time they hang out.  Everyone seems to forget for anyone it is always about perception, regardless of reality.  If you perceive someone won't understand that becomes your reality and Sierra's perception was completely off but it is what it is and everyone needs to either accept that as she is getting help or stay away and stunt her recovery.  Very good story pulling out all of our emotions and our On my way! perceptions.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2013 10:14 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part II

still sticking...

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2013 09:18 pm

Title: Fireworks. Part II

I want Sierra to grow on her own and away from everyone in town. I also want Maksim to kill Victor and potentially be with Sierra... Is that wrong? I want a completely new person for Sierra. Yeah she has made some mistakes but sometimes you need to grow from it and not let people continually punish you, which is what Jake will do. Loving the story and can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2013 08:52 pm



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