Alexandros doth protest to much, you have met your mate so claim her already. Or since she is a human how about wooing her first? I love shifter stories!!!!
Author's Response:
Ms. Gayles, I think his completely lost, we'll see if he does better in the next chapter.Thanks for reading, rating and reviews, it's a huge ego boost for a learning writer like myself, thanks again. Chapter 2 will be up in a few days.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 06:11 am
I like this story's beginning. Alex seems really confused. LOL. It seems like Ari cares for Alex, even though they HAD a marriage of convenience. Now that they are married and Alex bit her, will Alex turn into a werewolf? Will Alex stand beside and be faithful to his human wife? What is it with this Nola chick? Ari needs to open a can of whop a%& on her. More please.
Nyeesha
Author's Response:
Nyeesha, I'm loving all your questions, they help in keeping me focused. this might sound odd but I don't like one being to change form to suit their partner or mate.I love shifter stories and I always found it " not so ok" to have a human turned into something they are not. I know it's almost standard in the "shifter world" to do so.the reasons of why that's done are obvious, I chose a different path, a balance between the two. I love the gray area because I get to pull all kinds of colors to see how far I can go or rather what I can get away with,Lol.No I'm not about to mess up with a perfect system, I'm going to try to bring more or less, a perfect combination that I hope you will appreciate as a reader. if I go too far please let me know, as for the rest of your questions, the chapters I'll be uploading will hopefully answer them. Thanks for reading and keeping me on my toes.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 06:03 am
Werewolves and a marriage of convenience! Can't wait to read the next update...
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 04:51 am
Wow, that was good. Can't wait to read more. I hope he doesn't let Nora disrespect his wife anymore than he already has.
Reviewer: rthom13 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 03:59 am
I'm intrigued...keep it going.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 03:18 am
Please continue, I would really, really like to see how their relationship goes from this animosity to hopefully love. Laughing at the wolf. I can just imagine he's like " Nora, who?"
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I like your take on the wolf, he knows what he wants. Alex is Alex...Lol. I will update in a few days, busy changing a few things.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 02:19 am
great start looking forward to reading more
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 02:16 am
IM SOOSOSOSOSOSO IN LOVE WHAT A GREAT START! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ( soory about the caps lol)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, nevermind the caps. I'm making a few changes on chapter 2 it will be up in a few days.
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2013 01:28 am