Reviews For An Ardent Stranger
Title: Chapter 1

If Minerva is supersticious she won't open the box.

 

Welcome to the Chamber.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the welcome!  It's so interesting that you birng up superstion.  Minevera won't open the box because because she would see it as a point of honor.  She would never go back on her word.  As a very pragmatic historian I wouldn't characterize her as someone who gave a lot of credence to supertitions.  Schuyler, however, is definitely suspertitious.  He's absurd that way.  

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 21 2013 01:52 am

Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting makes you want more. I want to know what happened, why he gave her the pin? How did he know her given name?



Author's Response:

Schuyler is Min's husband.  They both live in the future and work together in the past.  They get up everyday and go to the sixteen hundreds to work.  At this point, Min hasn't met Schuyler nor has she been recruited to work for this future company.  Both she and Schuyler, who were born in different time periods, were headhunted for this company because of their unique expertise.  

Due to trouble at work Shuyler gives Min a pin that will allow them to travel in time without the knowledge of their employers.  With it, they'll be able to escape in time and live happily ever after!  I think they decide to settle as beach bums in their own hidden corner of time and space. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 07:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like this, but i hate it too! I wish I would have checked to see if it was a one shot before I read it! :(



Author's Response:

Phew!  I was worried that you hated it because of the content.  I will be posting a story with several chapters on the site soon.  It's a beta version of a novel I'm almost finished with.  Perhaps that will make up for your disappointment here!

Reviewer: Karrotpulp Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 1

I am not liking this challenge as you writers are writing some damn good stories that are only one shots.  It makes me want to cry!!



Author's Response:

Aww, such kind words!  Thank you!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

Don't worry about the Readlover and Love and Vengenance, that will show everytime you preveiw your work before you actually post it. It doesn't show up when you finally post it.

Now, your submission to the writer's prompt was so flapping good! Thank you for debuting your first story! And I hope that you will do more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the info and feedback!  I only realized that after I submitted.  I was so paranoid about it!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 01:34 am



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