Hell yes so far so good! I luv murder/detective mysteries/thrillers that's written fabulously and makes me think...Veiled Threat is one such story! And it's got my mind whirling... he was there wasn't he!? The killer was there I know it but where? Who? The guy with the perfect view, or someone else - perhaps the well-dressed, slimeball, serial dater? mmm. And why do I feel like I'm watching a movie with different scenes- seemingly random yet very much interconnected?
The scenes with Quinn and his knew partner Marco- I mean- Marconi Quinn is such a snarky badass, luv him already- were on point. It had all the elements of the ruggedly-handsome, jaded, detective; the pretty-boy, know-it-all rookie; and the geeky lab tech. Add in the riff with the blowhard boss and the DA whom I think may have an eye for Corwin, the serial unsub, a string of murders and the quirky female-lead and you've got the ingredients for a fab thriller.
Great job
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh... You just made my day! Thank you so much! Knowing that you're excited to read more makes me all the more excited to write more :)
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed
[Report This]Date: August 04 2013 04:09 am
Damn fine story. Keep it coming. Can't wait to see who some of these people are. There's a bit of humor too, which will be handy when it gets more dicey with the murders. Perfect mix.
"Quinn felt an impending battle between idiot and savant"
This creased me up. I actually laughed out loud at that. Marco is a dope.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Oddly enough, my original intention wasn't to be funny...that's just the way I talk to myself in my head (but I don't answer, so I'm not crazy lol).
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2013 12:32 pm
What is dudes problem? To enjoy scaring the bejeezus out of Nicole like that. I don't like that ho Sadie she mean to Nicole for no good reason. Sadie must be jealous? More please!!
Author's Response:
Hee hee...gotta keep my leading lady on her toes--strange men roam about ;)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 11:57 pm
Very intriguing!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2013 03:16 pm